The Burnt – Chapter 23

Love’s Ache

16 thoughts on “The Burnt – Chapter 23

  1. hope everything will be fine now. We went to maan geet became maaneet. We wait to see maaneet lovely moments .

    Enchanted silent wisper ko update kare plz 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

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  2. nice update

    continues with maaneet sweet moment … Love that

    maan busy in proff… Life n geet take it easy understanding his position but maan has other thoughts … Like the way u wrote significant changes in maan in professional level … Poor geet thought it as maan sharing it with him not knowing his purpose 😢

    geet eager to be with maan n spend happy family time for weekend but maan messed up high time

    geet was puting so much efforts with positive mind set but maan words hurt her deep again 😭 but like the way maan showed her anger n how u put that in words 🙌🏻 geet mentioning it’s always about maan n his ego anger n guilt …. Thats awesome 👌🏻 perfect 🙌🏻 feel geets pain 😢

    hoping that with last words n warring to maan make some sense 🤞🏻

    thanks for update 🤗

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  3. Hi, nice chapter dear, Maan asked geet to give him one week, after one week he will come in time, geet know he is busy, got agree on his request, Maan is super busy on his business and business parties, geet also got busy in her office, on weekend geet got ready prepared coffee for her husband, she took coffee for Maan and meet him in his room, He show the party clip to geet and said her that he is truly happy in his life, she shouldn’t waist her life on him, who insulted her love and turture her, he asked geet, she should fall in love with chetan, geet got angry on him, asked him to 1st get married to another girl then she will leave him forever, geet said that first his ego and now for his guilty he is separating her from him. Geet is truly hurt with his words.

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  4. Hi Anu

    trust that you are well

    thanks for the pm and update

    Chapter 23

    Profound update…. elegantly written

    of cos Geet just wants to be with Maan and cherish the moments with him

    well Maan was busy with work

    so he wants to show Geet that he is content

    as usual Pari continues to flirt with Maan

    alas never crossed her line

    great that she saw Geet’s pic in Maan’s office

    Geet’s thoughts were reasonable

    hmm Geet is imaging how everything will be when they reunite

    good that Maan interacted and engaged with the staff at the party

    wow Maan actually danced 

    the staff were indeed amazed

    as expected Geet wanted to spend quality time with Maan and made plans

    yet again Geet blames herself for leaving Maan alone

    liked Geet drooling on Maan

    its clearly hard for Maan to control himself

    loved seeing this confident Geet

    Maan’s comments were anticipated

    but Geet was adamant

    ahh Geet saw the clips of the party

    at least she realised that Maan was trying to convey something through this

    not surprised that Maan told Geet to move on and that she deserves someone better

    Geet was certainly shattered

    Gosh he told her to move on with Chetan

    how could he? 

    Geet’s anger and outburst was justified

    now Maan tried to calm her

    Geet was certainly furious and confronted Maan

    she assumed that Maan doubts her love for him

    cannot blame her

    after all Maan’s remarks did this

    sad that Geet had to explain herself

    hate that Maan hurt Geet again

    he was wrong to tell her to move on with Chetan

    she just wants Maan to win her back

    glad that Maan knows that she loves him so much

    yes he hurt her

    despite this she loves him immensely

    can he not see that she her happiness lies with him?

    oh she is willing to leave Advay with him if he remarries

    her question was reasonable

    his answer said everything

    her pain was understandable

    Maan needs to apologise to Geet

    update soon 

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  5. Well done geet! He needed that. Not always the MSK is right. Geet knows what she wants. He can’t set her up with someone else. And about Advay he needs both parents. He can’t give her place to someone. Even she can’t.

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  6. Superb part. Geets outburst was needed. Maan deserve her hatred but she is showering her love on him and he is in his guilt trip repeating his mistakes. She is hurt again.

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  7. wonderful update !!

    Maan wanted to prove to Gert that he is moving on and he is happy with his work and he has everyone to take care of him , indirectly indicating Geet that she should move on

    Geet sharply assessed what Maan in intend to tell her and gave her version back to Maan that his anger , ego is what made her go away from him and now with his Guilt he is making the same mistake

    she makes it very clear that her relation with Charan is nothing but pure friendship and her love for him since childhood is deep and unaltered.
    Hoping Maan will learn his mistakes and win her back.
    Waiting to read the next chapter

    please update soon

    cheers Anu !!

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  8. Captivating Chapter

    Surely a much needed one from Geet’s perspective!!!

    Maan needed to prove to Geet he is happy in his life

    but he also forgets that Geet herself wants her husband to be happy

    she understands the business world well

    Maan proposing she and Chetan be together making Geet furious

    that once again her love is been questioned and secondly her friendship

    is also been questioned.

    his anger this time was justified but I think it’s the pain that she shows

    and hopefully Maan will realize it’s time he makes his life right with Geet

    for themselves and for their son.

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  9. Fabulous update…so maan did plan things accordingly to make geet believe that he has moved on and is completely happy in his life… finally maan received the lesson from geet…poor girl bursted out the way he was taking chetan’s name…and geet was way too hurt with the way maan was thinking and felt hurt and believes maan insulted her love…glad that she did open…let’s see how maan is gonna make her deserving for himself while wowing geet back

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  10. Awesome update . Maan wanted to show geet that he is happy and moving on …. he tried to push geet away from his life cos of guilt and that’s why this time truly he has crossed his limit when he advised her to marry Chetan, after hearing this geet couldn’t control her anger and her outburst was natural, again maan insulted her love . Maan was kinda shocked after seeing her anger but it was needed…. hope from now maan will try to win her back .

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