Enchanted – Chapter 57

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  1. Hi, nice chapter dear, Malini ji left Maaneet alone for a while to talked, Maan said thank u to geet, to keep their child safe and keep herself safe, for find a safe shelter for her, they wanted to be each other arms but they can’t break the serenity of apna ghar, Maan drove them to the hospital for geet’s ultrasound, he stand in the queue for number, Maan is in so much pain after saw the hardship of life for geet, geet also in pain after saw him in line, Malini ji is absorbing everything, how they are comfortable with each other, Maan saw the last ultrasound of his child with tears in his eyes.

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  2. Hi Anu
    how are you?
    thanks for the update

    Chapter 57
    Poignant update… impressively written
    Maan and Geet’s reaction seeing each other was reasonable
    of cos Malini ji noticed the change in atmosphere
    Maan’s thoughts were understandable
    great that he wants to take Geet’s fears away
    admire how he handled the situation
    but Malini ji cleared that she called to meet Geet
    now Malini ji formally introduced Maanveer and Geet
    so Maan knew Geet was emotional hence did not look at her
    Maan’s concern for Geet was anticipated
    nice that Maan would be taking Geet to the hospital for her ultrasound appointment
    Maan was indeed elated….
    God did answer his prayers
    Geet felt bad for Maan
    Maan did assure Malini ji that he will abide by rules
    ahh Maan gets to know about Geet
    Maan clearly feels guilty
    sad seeing Maaneet so close yet so far
    as expected Geet assured Malini ji that she is fine
    Maan and Geet understand each other so well
    their love each other immensely
    liked that Malini ji wants them to get acquainted and left them to talk
    finally they talked
    oh Maan thanked Geet for keeping safe
    loved that she corrected him and said our child
    upset that Maan feels he deserves no right as he failed to keep them safe
    dismayed that Geet told Maan to leave
    Maan’s response was justified
    her question was anticipated
    she was naturally emotional
    Maan naturally cannot see Geet in tears
    pleased that Maan was direct with her
    he cannot live without her
    Maan just wants once chance
    as much as Maan was wrong so Maan was Geet
    she did not trust Maan and left
    she is aware that Maan would not be able to live without her
    he does have a right to know about their baby
    dadima was solely to blame
    wonderful that Geet shared the reports with Maan
    Malini ji is astute
    adore Maan’s care and concern for Geet
    Geet was certainly hurt seeing Raja Sahib stand in a queue like a commoner
    Maan’s thoughts well portrayed
    he does feel helpless for not providing Geet with comfort
    hmm Maan noticed that Geet was uncomfortable
    at least Geet did know that Maan was blaming himself seeing her hardships
    Malini’s thoughts were understandable
    glad that Geet wanted Maan to see their baby’s movements
    Malini ji was so surprised
    however Geet explained
    not surprised that Maan was emotional seeing the baby’s movements
    Geet was looking at Maan as well
    hope Malini ji will do something for Maan and Geet

    update soon

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  3. amazing part… Malini ji is thinking about them.. maan welcome speech n geet reaction to it planted this seed in her mind… Obviously she has seen so much that she can guess by their interaction now… Maan taking extra care for geet n geet being so much considerate that bringing him to see a baby… That surely can catch anyone eyes… Both are sad for this time but couldn’t gather courage to move forwad

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  4. what a beautiful part. You expressed all the emotions from both sides so beautifully also the thoughts of maliniji. Geet is such a sweetheart she managed somehow to give his right to see the baby. Maan is overwhelmed with all the happenings. Hope geet change her decision and give chance to maan

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  5. Lovely part though maaneet met he distanced himself from geet k knowing he failed her as her husband and to be a father to the child and never wants to claim them without geet’s will…though they had spoke with eachother there are yet to clear things between them …where one believes to be guilty and the other believes he doesn’t deserve to be in this place…geet cannot see maan behaving to the rules and regulations of the place as for her he is always the king…now that the hospital moment was nice…I believe malini ji got the clue about maaneet behaviour… waiting to read more…

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  6. emotional update 😢

    like the way u wrote maaneet interaction n their feelings n gestures … Everything is so perfectly written 🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻

    maaneet bonding seems noticeable to malini ji … It’s their love n care … That’s make difference 😍 love the way maan care for geet n geet at ease with maan presence …. Geet understanding maan let him see baby … Wonderful … N spl when geet mention OUR baby … Awesome

    love it very much 🤗

    thanks for update 🤗

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  7. Awesome update . It seems Malini ji guessed something cos she noticed Maan and geet’s behavior, maan’s care when he took geet for ultrasound….geet too told her to call Maan, she wanted to show Maan her baby’s movement during ultrasound….though they all are a big family nevertheless maaneet’s behavior was not so normal . geet knew maan felt guilty, though she told him to go but she knew he will not go …Maan knew he failed as a husband , failed to protect her so he respect her decision and distanced himself.

    Waiting for next part .

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  8. Hi Anu

    thanks for the wonderful update

    it’s very emotional and happy that both Maan could meet Geet and helping Geet

    Maan is feeling bad and remorseful, feeling as a failure in protecting Geet and baby

    the positive vibe of Hamara Ghar was definitely helping both of them

    I think Malini will be the moderator and solve the issues between the couple , she is already observing the changes.
    waiting for their proper reunion , hoping baby’s birth may change the logistics

    update soon Anu

    Have a wonderful day !!

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  9. Hey Anu Thanks for the beautiful update. Full of emotions. Though reading the update after a long but still this story is fresh in my mind….sometimes I had to go back n read other parts to relate to but with “Enchanted” I don’t have to now. This is one of the masterpiece story of your Anu. Thanks for your time n effort.

    Loved every dialogue n emotions in this update. Wow…”how will Maan breath without Geet” n here Geet is also concerned for Maan. Though they are apart yet their love can be seen in every way. Glad Maan cud see the baby’s movement…he has missed so much. Hope to see them together soon in the mean while I know you will make these moments of their life precious too.

    Thanks Dear n take care

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