Silent Whisper- Chapter 28 – Part 2

Part two of this chapter – (Introspection) is protected. I wish to get response from my readers for all the efforts that I take to bring the story to you all. So please show your response in likes and comments to get the secret to the second part.

17 thoughts on “Silent Whisper- Chapter 28 – Part 2

  1. this part is so emotionally draining for me ….hmmn cried while going thru all the different options….love it.you kept us in a cliff hanger again want more of itttt

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  2. Intriguing and Wholesome Chapter

    I really liked the fact that Rajendra spoke to Geet and perhaps this way too

    he will learn about her.

    Geet telling him that she wants to be Maan’s wife and the daughter in law to the family

    while Rajendra ask Geet what she’ll do when Maan gives her divorce and in that

    reply it was evident that Geet will do anything just for Maan’s happiness

    also he asking Geet if matters between herself and Maan were good would she have

    taken the time to speak to him

    and perhaps in a way all this will help Geet grow stronger towards his family where

    she truly can be called the daughter in law

    Geet herself has many facts to ponder about and make right between herself

    and Maan and between herself and her in laws

    hopefully someone gives Geet a small chance to prove herself

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  3. awesome update good that Rajendra so well with geet. Al Screnarios was well and last too good. Geet is not behind the property. Geet sincerely loving maan and accepted family

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  4. oh this was beautiful so geet had someone at home who could think about the future…the scenarios from maan’s father side was valuable as he thought maan could have given easily divorce to geet with wonderful team of advocates but he is denying the process .. geet’s answered genuinely towards the questions waiting to read more thanks for the PM dear ❤️

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  5. awesome update . maan’s dad was a sensible person , his conversation with geet was truly interesting….. it seems he was taking exam of geet and that was justified cos geet did many mistakes and she was right , she was arrogant in past but she learned her lesson that’s why gave to the point answer to maan’s dad except last one .

    waiting for next

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  6. amazing part

    rajendra understand his son so well …
    Understand his kashamakas
    regarding geet … N not filling for
    divorce… Very well written … Giving
    clear picture to maan feelings 🙌🏻

    like whole conversation…. Rajendra is
    very sharp person n want to know
    geets view n he did amazingly… With
    simply creating scenario n answering
    it… Geet is puting all her heart here so
    she knows right n wrong now but her
    past mistakes can’t be undone just
    like that…. Few things was touchy. ..
    Like Raj saying accepting influence
    family is easy not weak one …. and
    truly geet was not there for them
    even onces☹️ and the way geet
    determent to win maan back n if
    maan wants divorce she is ready to
    leave 😢

    Thank you for update 🤗🤗🤗

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  7. Hi, nice chapter dear, geet met with rejendra in garden to talk with him, she asked rajendra can she join him, rajendra not a rude person he permit her to join, he asked geet, if Maan divorced her can she will go against him to court, geet said that she will sign in the divorce paper and went away from his life forever, she apologized for her past behaviour when Maan is a part of her, she said that she thinks of them as her family.

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  8. Chapter 28

    Part 2

    Impressive update…fantastically written

    oh Geet wanted to join Rajendra for a stroll

    well Rajendra agreed

    Rajendra’s thoughts and confusion were reasonable 

    he indeed knows that Maan was deeply hurt by Geet

    he was correct that Maan has not fully closed the chapter on his relationship with Geet

    he is clearly does not understand what is holding Maan back from finalising the divorce

    great seeing Geet’s concern for Rajendra

    wish this would have been earlier

    of cos Rajendra gave credit to Maan

    Maan is an amazing son and brother

    Rajendra is clearly astute 

    his question was justified

    now Geet sees them as her family

    Rajendra’s remarks were understandable

    well he presented a hypothetical scenario to Geet

    glad that Geet was direct with Rajendra

    pleased that she knows that they cannot trust considering her behavior 

    Rajendra was naturally skeptical

    pleased that Geet admitted that she was wrong

    he raised valid points

    however Geet assured him that she has accepted this family as hers

    she has learnt the hard way

    not surprised with Rajendra’s further question

    as expected Geet keep trying will wait for Maan to accept her

    Geet and Rajendra’s convo was necessary

    pleased that he presented with her different scenarios 

    he clearly wants to Geet to introspect

    admire Geet’s resolve

    she loves Maan and will always love Maan no matter what

    so if he wants a divorce and signs the papers, she will leave Maan

    but will never move on

    amazed that Geet needed time to respond to Rajendra’s last scenario

    will she be able to prove herself?

    update soon

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  9. sensible talk between maans father and geet. Loved the part. The way maans father try to understand geet and deepness of love for Maan is truely beautiful.

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  10. Hi Anu,

    When I started reading this story, I felt this will be same as roothe piya ko maanao kaise with innocent maan and arrogant Geet. But damn you surprised me with a eloborate yet significant character sketch for both Maan and Geet. Each chapter from the start was intriguing and amazing. Their character development and their secret love seems to be something different from your other stories. Iam loving it thoroughly. I love how you are not rushing anything and defining each and every characters. You are one awesome writer.

    Coming to the recent update. I really like how Geet is handling the situation very calmly, sensibly, genuinely yet passionately(lots of inner turmoil). I really love Geets confidence and determination to know Maans family and to get what she has missed.

    Recently, few updates are mysterious with Maan’s business and their family problem. Hope to get to know what are the secrets of Maan’s business and family previous issues. Can’t wait to read more updates. Thank you for the PM.

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