Silent Whisper -Chapter 28 – Part 1

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34 thoughts on “Silent Whisper -Chapter 28 – Part 1

  1. I was badly waiting for this update , thanks for updating 💕 As usual it was amazing update , story is becoming more intense 💕💕

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  2. this part is so emotional.i feel maan from the beginning whatever reason it is of getting hurt from geet ot trying to protect himself he is not so attached to her in any sense.geet on the other hand is the one who was always letting him know of her love initially it might be infatuation but i can sense an unwavering love.i feel more for geet rather than maan. he is stubborn and practical.

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  3. the family and even maan i think they didnt even give geet enough time to bond with them.they are always thinking of family reputation,insults etc and even maan he stood by her but at the first insult to his ego he left her knowing she loves her.but did they ever try to think from her perspective.that it is not easy for a personality like her to get attached easily.to bond with the family first their relation should start and understand when that is not there then how can maan and family expect her to gel with them.none of them took extra effort to make a connection ,nether maan,nor geet nor maans family.Now savitri devi giving insults to geet i feel she doesnt deserve it. i feel for geet.

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  4. whahtever maan has faced with geet before he is ignoring the fact that he as well as his family are behaving the same way with her maintaining distance.there is a difference he behaving and his family behaving with her.aur yeh pagli geet she is so much into this family thing…

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  5. maan is being so mean to geet when he said what should i do with the information of that she loves him..maan from the begining is so shallow in his lover for her.now also he is not trying to understand her.he is so slef obsessed with his hurt and family.

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  6. both parts are great

    Geet doing her best and hope family sees this too

    Maan too is affecting but trying not to be in the same place he felt neglected earlier

    waiting for Geet to try and make change so they all accepts her which will be important for Maan too

    Geet’s conversation with her dad and Maan’s dad too was needed so as to see what she feels

    cont soon

    thanks for pm

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  7. putting entire blame on geet is wrong . Like she had shared about her GP s will he could have shared about dev s past . She wouldn’t have gone ahead.

    with family her behaviour wasn’t ok agreed but was there’s . They always considered her as a rich girl not just his bride .

    Birthday ka bhi , he mentioned pooja knowing shez not religious and not comfortable.

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  8. Fantastic and Worrisome Chapter

    Maan I can truly understand if he is not speaking to Geet

    he has been the one deeply hurt.

    but Dadima why is she now taking every opportunity to belittle Geet

    of course Geet was wrong in the past and it was Dadima that felt the marriage should

    happen as Geet is rich .

    Geet now has realized her status in business world does not give a wholesome husband

    and family , it’s love and care

    and now she is truly trying hard but seems like the Khurana family has been deeply

    hurt by her past actions .

    and though Maan avoids Geet I think he still care deeply yet he is scared she will

    again hurt him.

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  9. i know geet is trying from her side but maan’s perspective is also correct. He and his family has gone through a lot. So geet really has to ensure all this to gain their trust back.

    Amazing chapter!

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  10. Hi, nice chapter dear, Maan saw geet in his private area, Maan doesn’t like that, when geet saw Maan comes running to him and hug him tight, she confess she loves him truly from heart, Maan try to stay away from her, said her that he is very busy and his time is very precious, geet is ok with his decision and said that she will meet him again, in family gathering geet try to involve but savitri devi insulted her, geet said to herself that she will try to win Maan’s heart anyway, geet know that the family will never accept her because of her foolishness, she try to involve herself with them she try to help Sandhya in kitchen but Sandhya denied her help, in dinning table geet stay quiet.

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  11. wow Lovely update so geet did put up her courage to face maan and initiated the talk though maan was shocked by the intruder in his private space he is aware of his sherni’s willpower I liked the kiss part at last..

    wear geet was longing and yearning to be with maan…well maan is ignoring now but I m sure his side of view of enjoying this moments is different now that his focus is all about destroying the chadha’s though to complete him grandmother’s rivalry well other family members are still giving cold shoulder towards geet but she is not going to ose the war before trying it…

    geet is determined to win maan…well otherside her business to needs her attention badly…so their dinning moment geet first time remained silent which was a surprise for others…

    so maan to did take a glance of geet then and there..

    waiting to read part 2 now

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  12. Awesome update . geet is trying her best to manofy maan but it was not an easy task infact right now it was an impossible task cos in arrogance geet pushed away maan from her life in past , he was deeply hurt , his family faced insult so he locked his all emotions towards geet and behaved cold when she confessed her love to him and it was justified, geet herself know this nevertheless she was not ready to gave up and it’s really clap worthy . maan’s parents and dadima was talking when geet came to meet them but dadima behaved rudely with her and showed her place . Maan’s mom was sensible person and she talked wisely. geet’s position was not so good in their business, and Dev was behind this , geet knew that cos she showed him his place , due to Maan she is managing business, if maan divorced her she will lost everything but right now business is not her only goal …..she knew if maan divorced her she will be finish emotionally .

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  13. I was wondering why geet has to make amendments to learn about his family gel with them did maan really invested his time in understanding her and her family.its always maan’s family cribbing about geet .when geets parents never cribed about him.

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    1. Hi dear, thanks for your comment after so long.
      To your question –
      It is not Maan who is showing interest in life with Geet. Maan found that they are not compatible and moved on. Geet wants the relationship to work and so she is putting effort. Maan even told her not to put an effort and move on. They are not expecting anything from her, they just want her to leave because Maan claims he does not want to be involved in her and relationship with her. She forced her way to his mansion, while she did not care to visit his family even once then, even when he had invited, she declined.

      Also, Maan was least interested in marriage at very first place but still he is the one who compromised and stayed in his wife’s house, that too was given an inferior place to leave while she stayed in luxury.

      He did not talk to her parents because they forced that marriage on him when he was trying to focus on his goal. Still, she being his wife, he was there for her whenever she needed him and fell in love with her because she was his wife and in return getting insulted by her for one deal.

      Her parents had no reason to crib because they emotionally trapped Maan into the marriage

      His family is not cribbing but simply not entertaining her much. They want her to leave for which Geet is not ready and ready to take all ignorance to reach Maan.

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  14. awesome update

    maaneet little conversation was nice … Like the way u put geet feelings gestures in words 👌🏻 maan being straight forward stated like it doesn’t matter …. He has nothing to do with geet …. But at the end family notice maan glancing at geet at dining table

    like elders convo n view on maaneet… Everyone is right at their places …. Like siblings bond n how they all supported each other that time

    geet knows her mistakes n understand she has long way to gain her position back …. She is fully prepare to gain family trust first but it’s not easy as in all the time she never care for visit them Once … Thats really hurts all … Geet talk with her dad was emotion … Feels their pain 😢

    continues in part 2 ……

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  15. Hi Anu

    hope that you are well

    thankful for the updates

    Chapter 28

    Part 1

    Staggering update…. tremendously written 

    so Geet was lost admiring Maan

    of cos Maan was stunned seeing Geet in his private wing

    well Geet hugged Maan

    however Maan remained expressionless and composed

    as expected Geet told Maan that she loves him

    Maan’s comments were anticipated

    Maan was indeed direct with Geet that he is not interested in her nor any relationship with her

    Maan clearly stopped Geet from touching him

    Geet tried to explain to Maan

    ahh Maan was adamant

    admire her determination

    alas Maan did not budge

    eventually she agreed to leave

    Gosh she kissed Maan on his cheek

    he may deny but Maan was affected

    no wonder he went for a heavy workout at his gym

    Maan is protecting himself from being hurt again 

    Geet’s thoughts were reasonable

    she does love him….. 

    glad that she knows she has to win his love and trust

    its not an easy road

    at least she understands that no one would help her

    great that she acknowledged she deserves this treatment

    after all she hurt Maan and his entire family

    they were humiliated because of her

    will she be able to restore it?> 

    oh Savitri Devi, Sandhy and Rajendra’s discuss Maan and Geet

    SD was certainly angry that Geet went to see Maan

    Sandhya had a point

    SD’s question and Sandhya’s comments were understandable

    Sandhya was correct that Maan should decide how to handle the situation as its his personal matter

    the Khurana’s share a wonderful and close bond

    not surprised that SD shows Geet her place

    she does not mince her words

    now Sandhya intervened

    finally Geet realised that Dev was a foe pretending to be a friend

    oh Maan may have helped Geet as he wants Dev to fail

    good that Geet’s dad called

    his concern for Geet was justified

    he certainly tried to make Geet understand

    she was resolute

    appreciate Geet’s efforts

    Geet knowing Maan naturally did not make any convo 

    SD and Sandhya noticed that Maan’s gaze occasionally drifted towards Geet

    Maan’s actions reflect that he does have some feelings for Geet

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  16. Beautiful writting. Maan is hurt and his behaviour towards geet is justified but still feeling bad for her. Her behaviour towards maan was wrong in the past but that time she was not in love with maan fully. She now ready to face everything

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  17. As usual amazing part…

    Maan’s behavior is expected and he don’t want to involve himself…

    Geet is trying to make amendment with Maan and his family and she has long way to ago….

    All r right at own place and let’s see how geet will pave her way to Maan and his family’s heart…

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  18. I know what geet did to maan was very wrong but still she loves him before also now realising her mistakes she wants to have a second chance with maan hope maan understand that

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