The Burnt – Chapter 11

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  1. Wonderful update so Annie and dev arrived and was upset with their family to pass out the information of geet’s whereabouts to Maan…they were sure that she was leading peacefull life…

    Maan was undergoing guilt trip and was grateful for geet for allowing their son to be with him…

    Doctors advice made him to have a meeting with his family to bring in geet to be with them..

    And he decided to opt out which wasn’t ok with Annie and dev as they are worried for maan’s health too…

    so he decided to shift to outhouse… meanwhile geet revealed advay that his icecream uncle is his own dad and he overwhelmed with happiness…

    Otherside she confessed Chetan too that Maan is her husband and advay is his son…

    waiting to read more thanks for the PM dear ❤️

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  2. Awesome yet Painful Chapter

    Maan spending time with Advay outside

    as the hospital is not good for children

    Annie and Dev have arrived , and both missed Geet a lot

    when Dev learns that Geet has a son and the little boy is with Maan ,

    Dev is not happy about it

    but Geet clears him that she cannot keep her son away from his father

    while on the other hand Advay is filled with happiness just knowing his

    ice cream uncle is his Dad

    back at the Manor ,Maan explains the family that Geet needs them all around her

    while he will move out

    but Annie gets angry as Maan himself needs family around him

    it was then suggested that he will stay in the Outhouse and Geet in the main

    house with family

    I do wonder what will Geet’s answer be

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  3. Hey Anu! Hope u r doing good. Thanks for the update n password.

    Beautiful update. Each n every character are too good. Loved the way Dev n Annie showed their love for Geet but then u have clearly shown how much they care for their big bro too, even if they are angry on him yet they love him which is truly important in any relationship. Being angry but NO hatred.

    Advay is a cutie, so excited for his Dad. Glad that Geet knows the importance of Dad in his life n she is not going to stop him from being loved by his both parents. Again, you have shown that no matter what differences a person has, never let that get in the way of other relations. The hurt, problem that Geet has with her husband is purely between husband n wife n it shud never interfere between parents n children relationship. Its not easy but only a few can make the right decision.

    Hope Maan’s condition is not bad as said by doctor. Know you will reveal it eventually 😊

    Take care. Waiting for the update of other stories too but then I know its not easy n am being greedy 😁

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  4. Awesome update . Dev Annie came to meet geet with their partners to hospital , they loves her and she too loves them , she felt family vibes between them , then dev told her about meera , meera felt guilty and told everyone that she saw maan’s penance that’s why she brought geet in front of him . his name made geet uncomfortable and all felt that . Other side Advay was enjoying with his ice-cream uncle and that little boy was Super surprised and happy when his mumma told him he is advay’s dad than geet introduced him to his family . Maan talked to doctor and he told him that staying alone will be risky for geet . Maan discussed this matter with family , though they are angry with him but they care for him so they rejected his idea due to his health…. when he said to them he will move out , they agreed when he said he will stay at outhouse cos his presence stressed geet but geet’s decision will be final about this matter (staying with family) Maan remembered past ….how geet agreed to marry him .other side Chetan met geet in hospital and she told him about Maan and as expected he was shocked, though he was a good friend but never ever ask her about her husband .

    Waiting for next

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  5. nice update..

    maan took advay outside the hospital pand played with him..

    dev, Annie and daadi met geet..

    maan handed advay to daadi and geet introduction them to advay and told him ice uncle is his dad ..

    maan talked with doctor about geet health and doctor suggested to keep her with family..

    maan discussed with family about doctor suggestion and convenience geet to stay with them and he will move in out house..

    waiting for next update..

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  6. Hello Anu
    always appreciate the update
    thank you

    Chapter 11
    Riveting update… outstandingly written
    of cos Geet was stressed
    glad that Maan took Advay out
    as expected Maan kept checking on Geet’s condition
    well Annie and Dev know are about Geet and on their way to meet Geet
    liked that they love and care so much for Geet
    Maan clearly does not deserve Geet
    however he has repented
    will Dev and Annie understand this and see how much Geet loves Maan?
    so Maan does not want to see Geet as he knows she cannot bear his presence
    good that he does want to do anything against her will or harm her
    after so long Geet met Dev and Annie
    she was naturally uncomfortable when Annie called her “bhabhi”
    Geet was certainly confused seeing Meera
    finally she gets to know that Meera is Dev’s wife
    ahh Dev apologised to Geet about Meera’s action
    oh Meera tried to clarify her actions
    her reasons were understandable
    glad that she told Geet that Maan has changed and is repenting
    however Dev refused to believe that Maan has changed
    Dev had a point that Geet suffered
    at least Meera apologised to Geet
    agree that her intentions were not bad
    adore the bond that Geet shares with the Khurana family
    great that dadi told her that Advay is with Maan
    Annie was happy that she has a nephew
    hmm Dev was unhappy that Advay is with Maan
    Geet’s response was anticipated
    Geet was overwhelmed by Khuranas love and care
    Geet was adamant that Advay needs a father’s love
    Geet’s thoughts were reasonable
    cannot blame her
    after all Maan instilled these fears in her
    pleased that Geet wants Advay to meet his family
    loved Maan taking care of Advay
    not surprised that Maan went to speak to the doc regarding Geet’s health
    Gosh Geet told Advay that Maan is his dad
    Advay was so ecstatic
    he also met his entire family
    one thing for certain is that Advay loves his dad so much
    Geet has surely see that Maan loves Advay
    well the doc advised that Geet needs to be with family
    amazed that Geet told Chetan that Maan is her husband and Advay is his son
    despite what he did, Maan’s siblings care for him
    Maan wants his family to convince Geet to move in with them
    nice that Maan decided to move to the OH
    Maan’s thoughts were justified
    loved that he can do anything for Geet
    Past well incorporated
    hate Geet’s family
    wonderful that dadima told Maan that his alliance was fixed with Geet years ago
    dismayed with Maan’s attitude
    dadima had a valid point
    Geet revealed that nothing happened
    however her family was adamant that they get married
    Geet revealed that she loves Maan
    alas Maan agreed to marry Geet
    angry that Maan thought that Geet trapped him
    Maan ruined everything
    feeling for Maan and Geet
    happy that Maan wants to do everything with Geet’s permission
    will Geet agree to move in with the Khuranas?

    update soon

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  7. beautiful part. Every incident written so well. Geet and Maan both suffering without each other. Geets love is genuine from starting and was reciprocate very late but she don’t know about maans feelings. Geet has big heart. She told advait about his father and family. Wonderful part

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  8. dev n annie happy to see n meet geet

    geet clear her relation with maan to chetan who is her true friend respect her decision

    maan discuss geet’s condition so ask all to stay with geet n he will be away as his presence push geet in this condition

    but with maan’s health condition his family not ready to be away from him

    maan remember how he n geet get married n he thinks that geet trap him

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  9. Hi Anu

    Can you please send me the password 

    Can’t wait to read the update 🙂

    Thank you 

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  10. Beautiful update !!

    Thanks for the password Anu

    Geet feeling Advay to get his Dad’s love , is accepting in positive way suppressing her fear that Maan may take Advay away , she’s trying to come to terms of reality

    liked the friendship bonding between Chetan and Geet

    Dev and Annie’s love for Geet also care for Maan definitely pave a way to help mend the family relationship between Maan and Geet once they realize Maan is actually repenting which was seen and observed by Meera

    Maan going back to his past memories and getting more remorseful about his deeds is caring more for Geet do wants to keep himself away from family.

    Looking for next updates as how the story enfolds mending the emotions and hurtful indifferences between Geet and Maan!!

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  11. I couldn’t understand, how geet changed herself so much that she became a successful person in London. If she did it during her marriage time, maan couldn’t hate her, I think. Though geet was a good student but marrying a person like maan, she had to change her life style. Now, though geet forgive him, but maan never forgive himself for torturing her

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