Intezaar – Scene 5

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22 thoughts on “Intezaar – Scene 5

  1. A Cute and Amazing Scene

    Maan’s guilt is deep and yes he should be guilty

    assuming his wife to be different

    but worst Maan simply disrespected that Darji has gifted him a gift

    taking his watch and gifting it to Sam

    but now even realizing what he had done makes Maan more guilty

    oh Geet truly enjoyed and was indeed happy seeing her husband sleep

    in their bed

    then Maan coming into the kitchen to help Geet with chores was rather

    admiral

    waiting now for both to have their talk as Maan will confess but

    I hope Geet does not get hurt

  2. Beautiful part. Maan is guilty and doing blunders back to back. He nervous to tell her everything but not getting chance. He fell for geet in just night and geet is not ready to listen what he wants to talk. Why Sameera disturbing Maan now. Is she want Maan now..

  3. wonderful as well as emotional

    maan trying best to be normal but his guilt n deeds stopping everything

    maan’s nervousness scaring geet

  4. Lovely update…so geet being expert in reading minds knew that her husband has read her diary…and the calmness means of accepting their relationship…Maan being guilty for mis judging her is in dilemma to confess his deeds to her and is feared of hurting her again and in thought of starting afresh with geet…now that Sameera is often connecting him and all his focus is too owe his wife with due respect and love.. waiting to read more thanks for the PM dear 😍

  5. Wow! Nervous maan is a rear sight!
    Like his family even i get pleasure by the pleasurable view they presented.
    Waiting for one year for him to come and accept is relatively easy from his confession that has to come. In last two days she understood that he has accepted the relation and her.

  6. Lovely part
    Maan trying to talk to Geet but she knows him so well
    Can’t wait for them to start to know each other
    Cont soon

  7. Hi Anu

    hope you and your family are well

    thanks for the pm and update

    sorry for late likes and comments

    was away on a work trip

    Scene 5

    Great update… excellently written 

    Geet’s reaction seeing Maan sleeping next to her was reasonable

    well she placed a pillow near his head

    she was indeed affected when she touched him

    Geet’s hesitation, confusion and thoughts were justified

    she clearly knows so much about Maan

    sadly Maan knows nothing about her

    upset that he did not even get to know Geet

    not surprised that Geet excelled at college

    oh Maan is Geet’s subject

    of cos Geet gave her heart to Maan the moment she married him

    she was indeed hurt when he left after their marriage

    her doubts were understandable

    Sandhya’s curiosity was anticipated

    well Maan’s guilt increases 

    he certainly has to fix it

    at least he acknowledged what he did was wrong 

    liked that he wants to win his wife’s love and trust 

    however he should first confess his sins

    what he did was unforgivable

    what if Geet did the same?

    she will be hurt but she has the right to know 

    pleased that Maan wants to be hers

    admire the bond between the Khurana family members

    ahh Maan went the kitchen

    aww Geet drooling on her hubby

    great that Maan wants to catch up with Geet

    pleased that Maan realised how wrong he was about Geet

    dismayed that he just assumed and judged her 

    loved Maan admiring his gorgeous wife

    Maan was so nervous around Geet

    Maan’s thoughts well portrayed

    good that Geet confronted Maan

    she is naturally happy that he is back and accepted their relationship

    now Maan wants to start afresh

    Geet’s question was expected

    Maan responded aptly 

    hmm Maan has fallen in love with Geet 

    angry that Sameera is calling Maan

    what does she want?

    she told to forget what happened 

    alas is hounding Maan

    Geet could not help and drool on her hubby

    Maan wants to make all her desires come true

    wonderful that Geet confronted Maan about the watch

    hate that he gave Sameera that watch

    so he realised that Geet chose the watch

    Gosh Maan wants to talk to Geet

    Geet’s fears were anticipated

    hope Maan will be honest with her

    she will be shattered

    update soon

  8. Wonderful update dear….
    Loved geet’s pov n straight approach….
    Why is Sam calling Maan so many times????
    Will Maan tell about Sam n him to geet….i would love to know geet’s reaction….

  9. AMAZING update….

    Maan is overwhelmed with her love.. He feeling guilty n realised the depth of his actions.. He realized his mistakes.. He wants to start a fresh..

    What I liked the most is that he wants to accept his mistakes n clear all things before starting things on a clean slate.. But is it as simple as he thinks…

    He claims that he has moved on from Sam.. He wants to accept n start his relationship with Geet.. He is falling for her .. But then he so easily let Sam keep his watch.. Also he is still wearing her watch.. How? How does he expects her to accept his deeds n forgive him.. ?

  10. Too good. The way you have described the emotions of Geet, her pain, uncertainty of future n fear to loose all cud be felt. Geet is too simple. Glad Maan knows he made a mistake n wants to start fresh. Hope Sam doesnt create problems now that she keeps calling n also has his watch.

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