The Burnt – Chapter 7

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22 thoughts on “The Burnt – Chapter 7

  1. Superb part. Finally they met. Love the concept of this story. Geet wants to run away from the situation but Chetan force her to stay. Can’t wait to read next part

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  2. Curious and Phenomenal Chapter

    In the past Geet was just so happy to be in the same storage hut
    as her Maan , while he had no clue who Geet was .
    the villagers of course made a scene knowing Geet was with a man
    and I’m sure because of this very fact they forced Maan to marry Geet.
    but now at present he is so overwhelmed by seeing her and knows in his heart
    that she is his Geet
    I actually like how he addresses her as Mrs Khurana , at least now he can admit
    she is Mrs Khurana
    Maan has been in penance while Geet herself had a miserable with him
    please try and bring both together now.

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  3. Awww was waiting for this update eagerly…their meeting initially in the beginning was completely like a village film…so Maan helped her thinking it to be a random girl …and geet is lost to see her Maan infront of her all so close and hus words and him supporting her …made geet fall for him more deeply….❤️❤️ So villagers are thinking to get maaneet married…was he really in relationship with Sameera then….their present moments was so real…it doesn’t matter to Maan why she is here,what made her here…all he was bothered was geet being near him after ages that too after losing all his hopes….he was really proud of geet’s work…and she was so lost to even thank him for his appreciation….super eager to read more…. thanks for the PM dear 😍

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  4. Thanks for the update.
    Both were lost in the past of how they have were locked in the hut and the situation made villagers want to marry them where as geet was aware of maan but not maan whereas he was in relationship with Sameer.
    Coming to present both are in deep shock where as maan is super happy seeing geets work and geet.
    Looking forward for the next update.

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  5. Awesome update . so finally Maan and mishty met and as expected both were shocked and speechless….. they remembered their first meeting . though maaneet alliance was fixed but Maan was unaware about geet unlike geet , she not only knew his name , she saw his pic too so when villagers and her family was creating problem cos they caught them together , she told her family that he is Maan. her family too didn’t see maan’s pic that’s why they created problem and told him to marry her . Maan was shocked after hearing their demand . both came out from past and the ad was launched . Maan praised geet and this time he will not leave his geet alone .
    waiting for next .

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  6. great update
    maan n geet come face to face in party
    both remember their accidental meeting in past
    maan’s name engrave in geet’s heart when he defend for her
    maan dint like chetan scold n address geet as mishty n he corrected it as mrs. khurana.
    geet wats to run away n maan wants to hold her n keep her with him

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  7. Awesome update

    First meeting was dreamy for geet … She was all in to maan all her life n after 20 thanks to her friends she is dreaming about maan n knows him … well ignoring all bad (sameera 😡) simple girl lost in her own world … Love the way u wrote it 👏👏👏

    Maan was there for work n destiny made them meet … Maan geet in same room … Geet was so lost in maan thinking all in dreamy way … Her caring would be …. Not knowing maan don’t know about her existences 😥 i hv mixed feelings for that… Love it as it’s their first meet… but not liking it if I think about current situation n how maan touchred geet

    Maan fought for geet … Geet the naive girl fall once more for maan … Love the way u wrote geets feelings for maan 👌

    Villagers r mean 😡😡😡 maan was shocked with all that happenings
    geet with difficulty mention to darji that he is maan

    Present… Maan geet both shocked … Maan impress with new geet but more happy to see her in front of him … Geet lost state alaram chetan but he forced geet to stay … Maan adress Mrs K was shocking … For geet n for me too 😍 as I thought he will not say anything

    All watched AD maan close to geet appreciate her 😍

    Love the update 👌 thanks for update 🤗

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  8. Nice update..
    Finally maan met with geet..
    Both lossed in their past , how they met in hosiyapur in hut, how villages misunderstood them as they spent the night in hut..
    Chetan introduced Misty to Maan and all seen the ad and maan appreciated geet..
    Waiting for next update…

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  9. Hi Anu, how are you? Thanks for the pm and update.

    Chapter 7
    Intriguing update… remarkably written
    now Maan and Geet recall their past and first encounter
    Past…
    so that’s how they me
    of cos Geet knew who he was
    she was indeed happy seeing “her Maan” in front of her eyes
    well seeing his pics, Geet started building dreams and having desires
    as expected Geet trusted her Maan
    she firmly refused to believe anything against him
    she clearly believed that Maan knew about her
    liked that Maan was captivated by her hazel eyes
    great that Maan was concerned about her
    Geet’s reaction was reasonable
    good that he gave her privacy
    as expected Maan was oblivious of the orthodox village thinking and let Geet sleep on his bare shoulder
    Gosh the villagers saw them like that
    loved that Maan was possessive of Geet
    hate these villagers thinking
    Geet was really scared
    Maan’s confusion was anticipated
    at least Geet tried to explain to Brij
    glad that Maan stopped Brij from hitting Geet
    Maan’s anger was understandable
    oh no they wanted to kill Maan and Geet
    pleased that Maan managed free Geet from Brij and hold Brij at sword point
    Geet was overwhelmed
    alas Geet was re captured
    admire that Maan wanted to save Geet
    not surprised that they were adamant that Maan marry Geet
    Maan’s response was justified
    he had valid points
    ahh Geet’s family were adamant
    finally Geet revealed that he is Maan
    Present
    reality is slowly sinking in
    can understand that Geet wanted to leave
    but Chetan refused
    Maan was just happy seeing his Geet in front of him
    Maan’s thoughts well portrayed
    Geet was naturally shocked and dealing with seeing Maan
    one thing for certain is that she loves Maan immensely
    nice that Maan complimented Geet
    surely a first for Geet
    loved that Maan is determined not to let Geet leave this time
    he has to heal her every pain with love and happiness
    will he get to know about Advay?

    update soon

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  10. Very beautiful update 😍
    Finely Maaneet came face to face
    Both are lost in each other
    They remembered thair first meeting
    When Geet saw Maan first time she recognised her would be
    She loves Maan from the bottom of her heart
    But Maan don’t know him
    When the villager caught them
    They insulted Geet
    But Maan is standing for her
    Maan’s every movement touches Geet’s heart ❤️
    In present Maan is surprised by Geet’s precence
    He is impressed by her achivement
    And this time he don’t want to lose her

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  11. Wow!! I am back in commenting in wp, though by jetpack.

    Well Maan’s reaction is mind-blowing. No matter how many time may have passed, he exerts same right on his wife.
    How he addressed her as Mrs. Khurana, just awesome!

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  12. Such an amazing update dear…
    Geet n Maan found sleeping on each other shoulders …villagers misunderstanding the situation…geet informs him of being Maan…but him not being aware of it…
    Back to present…his behaviour.. holding her waist…
    Waiting to read further….

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  13. Awesome update. Geet was really a jhalli in the past. She saw Maan n his behaviour thru her eyes which was always seeking that love n her heart had already made him her saviour.

    Maan’s answer to the mob is right. No one has the rights to decide for others life.

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  14. Maanast first meeting after their adulthood was not good. I that meeting, maan really helped her as a good person. As he not like to marry anyone, when they forced him to marry geet who was a typical village girl according to maan,made him angry, after then maan made geet s life hell. Then she left him. Hope, now both will sort out their matter clearly

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