Silent Whisper – Chapter 1

Six months later, 

Maan settled on the dining  table of his two bedroom apartment in Thane, Mumbai and smiled at his brother Vikrant and Anwesha, who were busy in some discussion. They ignored him as his talk was nothing that could be termed as interesting. They respected him not only as an elder but because he was the sole bread owner of their family of six. Double Phd in BioChemical, Maan was best at his work and had great knowledge in his field and thus his salary in his field was much higher than normal. Though the BioChemical industry did not have average high salary but exceptional like Maan was at the higher end of industry standard salary.After tax, every month around  three lakhs got deposited in his bank account . But his responsibilities were even higher. Expenses for his salary included, Grandma’s regular medication due to old age health issues, Dad’s high cost medical bill as he was on a wheelchair, EMI for a two bedroom apartment in decent society in Thane, saving money for Anwesha’s wish to go abroad and study and last but not at all the least, saving for his own dream of setting  up his own venture in BioChemical industry, high fees for his own MBA course for professionals from reputed institute.

Vikrant was the only one who had become independent recently. But he earned only enough to get his expenses out.  Seeing Maan not leading a fun life and always boring himself in study, had made Vikrant to not do what his brother has done, that is not to enjoy his life. He had done average and was earning average. Again unlike Maan, he did not wish to spend all his youth in sacrifice. He wanted to enjoy his life and thus his expenses were high enough to use all his earnings. And Maan had supported him in this, or said encouraged him. According to Maan, if one person in the family was already taking on the expenses of the family, other members should at least enjoy their life. Maan did not want his siblings to struggle as well. He was working on fulfilling his dream then his siblings should also do what they wish their life to be.

Dadima was seated in the head seat, still believing that she was the head lady of the village and wife of Sarpanch, sitting with pride in her Haveli of Hoshiyarpur.

Sandhya, his mother, who was done placing bowl on the dining table looked at the two busy siblings

“Vikrant and Anwesha, is this how you do? Bhai is there on table and you two do not bother to even wish him”

“Mom, am I any guest? We sit daily together for dinner, why to go for formal wishes and all? Carry on guys”

Anwesha pouted “Mom, Bhai is right. You just love to guilt trip us.” She turned to Maan

“How was your day Bhai? Bhai, actually this meme, it’s so funny. I was showing Vicky Bhai. See” she forwarded her phone to Maan. Maan forwarded his hand but then she backed out. Maan simply smiled to himself

“Leave it Bhai, you will think it’s silly.” she shook her head “Anything fun is silly for Bhai”

 Maan quietly backed his hand.

Sandhya opened her lips to put some sense in Anwesha but Maan signaled her to let it go.  He didn’t want the fun dinner time to be boring and a lesson learning session for his siblings due to him.

“Annie, show me dear and explain it to me. I want to be up to date. Your elder brother can’t be fun but your Dadima is”

“Dadima you are already up to date. See how you call us Annie and Vicky. Bhai calls us Anwesha and Vikrant in front of our friends. Bhai you know it looks so out of place.”

“My dear little sister, I am busy with my job, research, my MBA program and my dream, so I miss on current social media trends of calling siblings with fancy names.”

“Bhai, I know you have the responsibility of the whole family, but can we not have fun at least on the dining table. Or we need to realize every minute that the whole family is running on your shoulders. Mom and Dad anyways don’t leave the chance to tell us this ten times a day”

“Anwesha, you do not have to remember at all what I am doing. Being the elder of the family, it is my responsibility.It’s nothing special that I am doing. But if you dream of going abroad, you can put some effort into getting scholarships rather than updating yourself with the current social media trend. I am arranging for funding, but you will feel proud if you get some scholarship”

“Bhai, you have just turned thirty this year, but you act as forty. I don’t want to give up on all youth trends because we have less money and earn scholarships for money. You promised me, you will do anything but fulfill my wish and now when you are not able to, you are pressuring me for a scholarship. I am studying and giving exams for scholarships but I won’t give up everything and bore myself only in books like you.”

Vikrant supported Anwesha  “Don’t behave the same with your wife Bhai, when you are married. She will run away in a year listening to your money saving lectures”. Anwesha laughed with her closed lips. 

Maan moved to Vikrant “Vikrant, I don’t speak as I have much on my plate than getting into useless arguments. I believe in my work to speak rather than words. And not for what I do for my family but don’t you think you should respect me as I am your elder brother.” 

Vikrant looked down “Sorry Bhai. I was just…”

“Fine, but try to know your limits when you speak,” Vikrant nodded. That made Annie keep her lips in control as well and his Dadima also knew, when her eldest quiet grandson gives warning to one, it goes to all.

“Anyways, talking of a wife, someone approached me for their daughter’s alliance” Everyone got excited but Dadima uttered 

“One more to feed. We are in shortage with what we have, one man to earn, let’s add one more to our feather”

Sandhya looked shocked at her mother in law 

“How can you say so Maa? Maan is the perfect age for marriage. He is the one doing it for the whole family and does he not have to start his own life?”

“I am not his enemy but you should be a bit practical Sandhya. This family of six is running on Maan’s salary. Annie has to go abroad. Once his wife comes, she will claim her expectation on him as his wife”

“Maa-Dadima, can both of you let me complete? I have declined the offer.”

“Why Maan, you do not need to discuss your parents? ” complained his father

“Papaji, it’s nothing like that. It was an absurd proposal, made no sense.”

“So, Bhai. For a person like you, loaded with responsibility, do you imagine a proposal from a business tycoon for his daughter. All proposals are going to be absurd and you need to choose from them” Laughed Vikrant, Anwesha and Dadima

“So Vikrant my brother, to let you know, it was absurd because it was a proposal from a business tycoon for his businesswoman daughter” Maan answered everyone with calmness yet clarity

“Anything” Vikarant shook his head

“Everyone here knows the Handa group, right?”

“Of course Bhai” laughed Annie “Now don’t tell us that Mohinder Handa came to you with proposal of his only daughter, the beauty queen, aggressive and dynamic business women, Geet Handa and you declined it”

Maan came forward, held Anwesha’s shoulder. “You got it perfectly right dear sister. It was proposal from Mohinder Handa for his only daughter, the beauty queen, aggressive and dynamic business women, Geet Handa and I declined it”

“WHAT?” came in unison from everyone.

Now everyone was after Maan trying to know details but he left for his room letting them know that it was something random and they should stop thinking. But in the hall, the whole family was in shock, with so many questions. Why would Mohinder Handa bring that proposal, that too for Maan the most simple and boring person. And why would Maan decline such proposal

“Who declines proposal of marriage with Geet Handa. She is the ultimate combo” Said Vikrant

“Vicky Bhai, Bhai just said to shut us up and not trouble him further. Why would anyone propose Bhai for Geet Handa”

“Because your Bhai is a Gem” Sandhya came in support of her son, who just kept doing for the family but in exchange his siblings ,and even his Grandma are branding him as not so interesting a person. Nothing fun to talk about.

“Sandhya, every son is a gem for their mother, doesn’t mean they will get a proposal for Geet Handa. Even old people like me know that girl. She is always in the news. How smart and beautiful the girl is”.

Maan got busy fixing the readings and study of the lab and then completing the assignment for his MBA course that he has taken as a course for professionals. Classes for which were online or sometimes evening classes or weekend classes. 

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13 thoughts on “Silent Whisper – Chapter 1

  1. Maans dadi anvesha and Vicky are so selfish. Why maam not showing them mirror and why taking their responsibility when they don’t deserve it. Dadi is so rude to him. Maans mom feeling bad for him.

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  2. Such an Intriguing Start

    Firstly, Maan is intelligent earned a double PHD
    in Bio Chemical Engineering .
    and though is salary is good it’s not allowing him any growth
    as all family responsibilities is on his shoulder .
    though Maan seems quiet but he is also stern in his ways
    Dadima out rightly rejecting the fact that Maan should marry
    all because there will be another person to feed and take care of.
    somehow I felt Dadima was been selfish .
    Annie does not even want to acknowledge Maan’s advice
    while Dadima , Vikrant and Anwesha maakes fun of Maan
    did Maan just blurt out about Mohinder Handa’s daughter or did
    they really approach Maan

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  3. hurtful update
    how maan’s family disrespecting him who are dependent on him for there small need.
    I find daadima weird n selfish
    only maan’s mother n father are on his side n loves him
    maan is ruining his life with such selfish family
    three of them brother sister n dadi are ignoring maan’s efforts n clamming him bore person who must provide every thing they wish in their life

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  4. Lovely so maan was from middle class family and is caring towards his family where his sacrifice seems to be taken for granted by his siblings and he was quite intelligent too…so Mohinder Handa approached him for alliance and now that makes me curious and he as already rejected it… waiting to read more ❤️

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  5. Nice update
    Though maan is poor but he is hand working and responsible man I don’t he will leave his family and live with geet …if not for geet weird conditions ,maan leaving the family and live with geet coz his siblings and dadima are so selfish

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  6. Hi Anu… hope you are well. Thanks for the pm and update

    Chapter 1
    Riveting update… greatly written
    sad that Annie and Vicky ignore Maan
    great that Maan is intelligent and hard working
    admire that he is taking care of his family
    so Vikrant wants to enjoy life and not sacrifice like Maan
    Maan is a wonderful brother and does not want to his siblings to struggle
    well for his siblings and dadima, Maan is boring
    alas Maan has his head in his shoulders and knows what he wants
    dismayed that Annie taunted Maan
    Maan had a point
    Annie is so arrogant
    upset how Annie and Vicky behaved with Maan
    Maan’s anger was reasonable
    wow Maan got an alliance
    his family were indeed excited
    hate dadima’s comment
    she is so selfish…..
    Maan also deserves to be happy
    Sandhya’s reaction was justified
    agree with Sandhya about Maan
    of cos Maan declined the alliance
    Maan’s dad was correct
    but Maan explained
    angry that Vikrant made fun of Maan
    dadima, Annie andVicky had no right to laugh at Maan
    Gosh Mohinder Handa wants Maan to marry his only daughter The Geet Handa
    how did they find Maan?
    that certainly shocked his family
    their curiosity was understandable
    as expected Sandhya supported Maan
    disappointed with dadima’s response
    not surprised that Maan got busy with his work and studies

    update soon

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  7. awesome update . we can see maan’s family and their thoughts , his siblings annie and vicky kinda ignore him cos according to them he is a boring person and their dadima too supported them but its also fact maan is only earning person and he is trying to fulfill everyone’s dream . his mother understands him . so mohinder brought the proposal of maan and geet alliance but maan refused it . his family was shocked when they came to know this .
    waiting for next

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  8. Awesome update
    Maan is doing everything for his family
    But Aniee vikrant and his Daddi ma hurting him with their words and behavior
    When Maan told them that he declined the marriage alliance of Geet Handa
    They can’t believed him
    But Loved that his parents are proud of him ❤

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  9. hey you I was checking some old emails and by mistake, I opened this mail and got to know you started this new ff God I am hooked this one is so very interesting I am not getting time to read FFs but I’ll make sure that I take some time to read this one already waiting for the next chapter please update soon

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  10. Quite interesting…
    Loved the hard working maan… I do not like the way annie n vicky speak of maan.. Even after maan told them to know their limits as he is their elder brother…

    So the proposal has come n maan already rejected it… Let’s see where this goes…

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  11. Interesting update..

    Mohinder Handa approached Maan for Geet’s proposal.. But he declined it.

    His family is so ungrateful n unappreciative. They just don’t acknowledge what he is doing for them. Just taunting him n degrading, insulting. Only his mom loves n cares about him.

    Maan is working hard. He will definitely make it big for himself.

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