Silent Whisper – Prologue

Silent Whisper 2 Minutes

“Geet darling, are you sure about this”

“Cent percent Dad. I have thought from every angel and this is my final list”

“Geet, you are not buying any party supplies that you have come out with a list. You will be married to a person and he will be your husband. He will not be a thing but a real person with flesh, blood and brain”

“Of course Mom, all the criteria that you mentioned, I have taken care of in my list. He should have a brilliant brain, great looks but poor and needy. That is needed for him to run on my wish. He will be a puppet husband, just for a show. I just need him so that these eagles do not have any chance to claim our business empire.”

“But why poor needy and a puppet husband, Darling”

“Dad, this business empire of ours is my only love. I cannot give love to anyone and I can’t give anything to this relationship. And there are few major problems with a rich and not so needy person as my husband. First, he will expect from this relation and not act just as a puppet, to be available to act as my husband as and when needed, second, even if he somehow agrees to come and stay with me here after marriage, which is highly unlikely for the rich guy, he and his family will expect a wife and daughter in law acts from me and I am clearly not into that idea from any angle. If you find a rich guy who is ready to marry me with these conditions and not expecting a single penny or attachment from my side, you can very well find him.”

“Why will anyone affluent agree to your weird conditions, Geet?”

“That’s why Dad, I came with this criteria – Brilliant brain, so he can act as my husband whenever needed, Good looks, so I can present him in society after decking him with expensive attire and poor and needy, so we can buy him and he runs as per my wish.”

Rano’s temper rose on Geet’s weird talk about having such a husband. Even though very rich, she has always learned to respect life partners.

“You are not asking for husband but slave”

“Mom, I am not going to insult him. It will be a deal. He will bargain himself for my money. He will act as per my need as and when needed. He will be given his own separate luxury suit to live only the condition will be, he will have to forget his own family and can visit only on my permission.”

“Geet Darling, why would a man with brilliant brain do it, even if he is poor”

Geet gave a cunning smile to her Dad and came towards him

“Because when you find a suitable candidate dad, you will make sure that he becomes so helpless and needy that he has no option but to sell himself to us.”

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Here’s the riddle – let me know it looks like season 2 of which of my old fiction. Though the story and feel will be entirely different.

Only small updates may come of this as bonus of other updates.

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27 thoughts on “Silent Whisper – Prologue”

  7. The old story is Roothe Piya…
    I liked that story This prologue looks interesting with a twist. A helpless Maan is difficult to digest but in the end we come to see the real Maan. That’s what is important.

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    1. Thanks ❤️. I get bored with Rich Maan and Poor Geet always. Not sure if he will be helpless. Maybe poor is not always equal to helpless. But let’s see.😊

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  8. Hello Anu…
    thanks for the surprise……

    Congrats on the new story!
    well its Roothe Piya Manaoo kaise

    Fascinating prologue
    this Geet is so arrogant…..
    hate her attitude…..

    looking forward to the updates….
    thanks 🙂

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    1. ❤️ . Ohhh my, i didn’t expect every one to easily guess it. But happy that so many have already read Roothe Piya. Their character here will have little different shade.😊

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  11. Roothe piya…

    Agreed, that sometimes Maan can be poor n Geet rich.. But for that she doesn’t really need to be a brat…

    Maan never used Geet Or insulted her, he always respected her family.

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    1. Yes, she won’t be a brat in this one. As the name suggests it is complete romantic take. She clearly told her mother that she will not insult her husband. I will say.. give it a try as it will be filled with silent romance 💝

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  12. Roothe piya manua kaise
    This also seems interesting like the previous one can’t wait to read this one also , Geet expectation is totally diff from everyone for her life partner
    Update soon

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  15. Lovely so geet is high headed and wants to buy a husband this storyline seems interesting…well will see who will she make agree and how will things turn… waiting to read more ❤️

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  17. Thanks for the pm Di☺

    Congratulations on your new story❤!
    Fascinating prologue

    Geet seems to be the high headed, self centered and a rich spoilt brat.
    She wants a man to be her puppet with a name sake tag of a husband.
    She thinks that being poor means being helpless and they would do anything for money..well that’s absurd, or she has experienced something that has made her to think so…she even has terms and conditions as of a business deal.
    O man..the last dialogue of hers shows how cunning she is..to get things her way, she is ready to corner her object of interest in such a way that it has no other way but to agree with her.
    But I don’t think Maan will be the person she wants him to be. I can’t see Maan being helpless..

    I love reading the role reversals of Geet being rich and Maan from middle class.

    I loved reading the first season of this- Roothe piya.where Geet had been too rude and insulting.

    Eagerly waiting to read how the story progresses..if geet will be able to change her perspective on poor and needy.

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  18. Hi. Prologue was so good. Feeling bad for Maan. He needed a partner who would understand him well. While Geet is tough girl,I think once Geet get to know him, she would protect him.

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