Enchanted – Surrender

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In the beautiful garden, decorated with yellow and orange flowers all over, the haldi was taking place. Geet had adorned a light yellow saree with a thin strap blouse. She had flower jewelry, specially made and gifted by ladies of Kalsia. The flowers with specific soothing and calming effect fragrance were selected so that when Rani Sahiba adorns them she stays happy and calm all throughout the day. 

All the ladies gathered in the big garden. Geet was seated in the center. She had a smile on her face when Vicky and Annie came with Haldi that had been placed on her husband. Ohh.. all these calming fragrance did not help her heart, which was dying to have a talk with him but she could not. Dadima had taken Maan’s phone as he kept getting calls for work. Him getting calls can only be urgent and thus Dadima wanted him to ignore everything on this day. Vicky had to handle everything for him this whole week. 

Somehow, in Dadima’s talk with Maan and Rano’s talk with Geet, the two ladies got the idea that these two have not yet started their relationship as husband and wife. Rano had even chided Geet, knowing very well that such silly ideas of making her husband wait so long can only come in the brain of her unique daughter. 

“Maine to aiywain hee bola tha, he took it so seriously” Geet had made faces

“Fine. Now what’s done, is done. Going forward, no such silly acts. He made you queen of this whole empire and you could not become his wife yet. Really Geet, what do I say” she did not want to be too specific in talks on such matters with her daughter but how do she tell that Geet has actually risked her wonderful marriage by such distance. Normal man, how long could one wait? It was Raja Saheb’s greatness that after this stupidity of hers, he loved her so much.

Poor Rano, does not even know that starting six seven months, Geet had not even seen her husband and lived separately and flirted with him, knowing him as another man. Her family would go all mad and hyper, if they come to know that part of the story. They would not even care to understand all efforts that she had made to win his trust back.

Anyways, due to this knowledge, Geet’s family and Dadima wanted to make this marriage with all the rules of first marriage. It will be the start of their married life in a real manner. Thus they were strictly denied meetings or talks.

It was an evening and celebration mood in the whole Kalsia. Again Kalsia and each individual in Kalsia were decorated. Large gifts from the Royals were presented to people of Kalsia as a show of happiness and an ask of blessings.

The Botanical garden was decorated like a bride. Geet was looking beautiful with Red lehnga, embroidered with gold and diamond all over. She had a heavy Jarawoo set, with Big Nath and Maang tikka. A typical tradition, queen bride.

Raja Saheb had dark Green exclusive Sherwani, with Mukut on head and long pearl necklace.

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Smiles formed on their faces as they settled beside each other for the rituals. Whole day of no talk and seeing one of the most beautiful versions of each other, their hearts were beating fast. Anticipation of their togetherness after marriage; restlessness was natural.

Rituals started, People and families kept showering them with flowers as rituals kept on going. It looked like the rain of flower petals in the Botanical garden.

Mohinder and Rano did the kanya daan. Raja Sahib and Rani Sahiba, took the vows around the fire along with the mantra that was going on. They vowed with full heart, to be with each other in each step of life. Any hurdles in life, they will walk hand in hand and never leave to the side of others. His family will be her responsibility and her family will be his family. Their love will come with respect to each other and their wishes above their own self. They will keep each other above them always in life. 

After the vows, they settled. Maan placed vermillion and mangalsutra on Geet. Geet closed her eyes to absorb the most beautiful event of her life.

Everyone blessed Raja Shahib and Rani Sahiba.

Geet’s family went to the palace where they had been staying, Dadima and Annie left in one car, Vicky in another, overseeing the security. Maan and Geet settled in one car. It was a half an hour drive to the Royal main palace. As Geet settled, her heavy jewelry made a jingling sound. Car started and Maan moved a little in mid Geet smiled and moved a bit in the center. Both were quiet but there were waves going in their heart.

Maan and Geet were welcomed with aarti and music. Maan settled in the grand hall of the palace while Annie and other girls took Geet to their decorated room. Annie helped her settle in the bed 

“Bhabhi, can’t believe this will be your first night for real. Bina kuch hue itna deewangi hai, abb kya hoga”

“Annie” Geet pouted. Annie and girls laughed and left Geet 

Maan entered the room and Geet’s heartbeat raised with anticipation. Maan had calmness in his face but there were waves in his heart. His heart had not been in his control since he had seen her in her bridal dressing. She was the most beautiful and desirable bride.

But as of now, he could only get a teasing glimpse of her. The bed was covered with strings of white flowers and roses covering the bed from the ceiling.

Geet could feel Maan was in. Her heartbeat raised again. As she felt his step closer, she curled her fingers and crossed her hands on her leg.

Geet dug her eyes to focus on her feet decorated with Mehndi, her fingers playing with the small bells on her heavy multi layered anklet. The jingling sound of her bangles and anklet were only making Maan lose his patience.

Maan held the flower strings in his fist and moved them aside. Geet closed her eyes as she felt his weight on the bed.

Maan held the side of her pallu and lifted it and slid it to her back. Ohh… how beautiful she looked and she was all his. But alas, she had her ways to test his control. Her eyes were still grounded on her feet.

Maan placed his fingers on her chin and lifted her face to make her meet his eyes “Maa-aan”. He placed his finger on her lips

“Shhhh…. ek bhi sabd jo mujhe roke, nahi chahiye aaj mujhe” He paused and looked into her eyes. 

Their eyes kept looking into each others, moving from one eye to other 

“Bahek jane do aaj mujhe aur beh jao mere saath”. He kept admiring her beautiful face for a long time, soaking her beauty with his intense gaze.

Geet could no longer take the intensity of his look and moved forward to hug him. Maan’s hand went on her bare back and Geet hugged him even tight. 

Maan’s hand felt the skin of her bare back. He pulled her closer. Geet’s heart beat raised as his fingers started playing on her bare skin. She gasped as he pulled her dori. She raised her shoulder, turned her face and snuggled up to him. Hiding herself into the one who was exposing her “Maa-aan”.

Maan smiled with her sensually calling out of his name but today he was in no mood of mercy.  These acts of hers are only going to encourage him today and as a result, his hand found one hook at the very bottom of her backless blouse on the thin border holding the blouse and he uncooked it with a click.

“Maan please”

“Learn to be bold with me Biwi. That may help you” with that he separated a bit to see her all flushed face. Ohh her beauty enhanced ten folds with natural redness that surpassed the bridal makeup she had. Her blouse was still on her but shamelessly hanging in front of him. He again lifted her face and  placed his hand on her one cheek, moved forward and placed a kiss on her forehead. Geet closed her eyes to absorb his love for her. Smile formed on her face as she was ready for a complete surrender to him and their beautiful relationship in all ways.

Maan took all the time to get off her jewelry one by one, his hands making sensual touches as he did his act. completely taking Geet to a pool of sensation. He started with removing her maang tikka and kissed her forehead, then pulled out her Nath from his teeth, gave her kisses on her cheeks, played his fingers on back before removing her necklace. Sat down on his knees on the ground to give sensual kisses on her belly before getting her waist band out from his teeth. Kisses her feets, before removing her anklets. Geet was by now filled with an entire jingling sensation all through her body, losing all her strength.

Maan laid down a strengthless Geet on bed and removed her blouse from her top, looking directly into her eyes. Geet closed her eyes from her palms. Maan removed her palms from her eyes and held them on side with his knees. He was already laying, hovering on top of her, giving a wide open eye look to her bare front.

Geet closed her eyes, as if her closing eyes would stop him from viewing her. Maan bent and kissed her eyes “Open your eyes, if you want it as much as I want it. This is ours night, not mine only”

Geet gathered and slowly opened her eyes, giving him the answer he was looking for. Maan pressed his lips on hers, Geet opened it for him. He went deep inside as his hands moved up to grab her curves

“aaahh” current of sensations ran through her whole self. “Aaaa” she moaned again as he bit her again, a little harder. He cared less and grabbed them harshly  in his fists. He continued his torture on her tightened curves as he moved roughly from her lips to open mouth kisses on her chin and then crook of her neck, moving down further to bite the flesh of her bulge. His fingers played mercilessly with her tightened tip, pinching and crushing them in turns. Geet wiggled but in vain.

“Aaahh- aah” but he was nowhere a merciful and understanding husband as of now. He has left those characteristics out of the bedroom. She was in a merciless hand.

He grabbed them again in his hand and sucked them with full mouth. Geet wiggled, her hands were held and she could do nothing. He moved up and gave her one harsh kiss on her lips and got off the bed. 

Maan moved towards the cupboard, giving Geet some time to gather his roughness. He turned and threw a packet at her.

“Change into these while I get rid of this heavy sherwani. Only this on you” he warned

Geet took the packet and covered her front and got up to go to washroom

“Where are you going? Change here and fast” he said as he started unbuttoning his sherwani

“here?”

He completely removed his sherwani to bare his upper body. Geet, covering her front with the packet he had provided, was lost looking at his physique even though cursing him for his shamelessness.

He took the towel “Change before I am done. It will be more fun though if I do it for you” he warned with a laugh

Geet’s eyes widened. But as he took his track pants, she realized she had very less time. She turned, opened the packet and without taking time to analyze what it had she placed it on herself from top, covering her front and then getting off her lower skirt.

But the moment she realized what minimal amount of covering that piece did on her , she was encapsulated in his strong arms

“I thought you were shameless, you are ten folds more” she complained

“Ohh Biwi, it’s just a start. If this was ten, be ready for a hundred such folds” he kissed her cheeks with open mouth and he moved his hands between her inner thigh and rubbed his hands there, jolting Geet from deep within. Geet was yet to realize, he was in a total uncontrolled mood today and he had planned the same between them forever, that she will know in coming days.

The piece that she was wearing just reached her bottom inner.

“Maa-aan” Geet turned and hid in his chest

“The more you are shy the more I am going to get encouraged to break you” But his warnings were not working on Geet. She felt too shy with the shameless way he had his hand now on her bottom bulge and brought her closer. He pressed it hard as he bent to suck her upper bulge popping out from everywhere of her thin material. All Geet did in this was hold him tight and her nails dig into the skin of his back. 

Maan rubbed his hand between her thighs to feel the thin material between her inner part. It was already wet “Maa-aan” He then separated her, held her shoulder and placed her on the wall. 

“I asked you to keep only this piece on, now who is gonna remove the extra piece”

Geet was all flushed, her heart was up and down with that level of talk. His level of shamelessness was beyond her imagination or capacity of handling. 

“wooo…. ”

Maan smiled and supported his side on the wall and placed his hand on her cheek

“Itna sharmaoogee to kaise hoga… ” Geet looked down not able to speak

“So let’s work on this… ”

“Ji…”

He went near her ears and whispered “Now you get that piece out on your own or” He smiled and placed the kiss on her red burning cheek. She nodded for No. He came forward placed deep kiss on her lips

“Then enjoy my way..” one side he was being shameless with no mercy, on the other side Geet was losing her heart with his bare body, his strong arms and most of his shameless ways with her. All she wanted was to melt in his arms but his ways were only filling her up with shyness.

He picked her in his arms. Geet thought he was leading her to bed. Geet could feel his arms on bare skin of her thighs, Geet hid her face in his chest.

But soon Maan placed her down near the bed pole. He took out the silky belt which was holding  her thin dress together, baring her front again to him. 

“Maan, please…”

“Shhh” he placed finger on her lips “Just Enjoy Biwi!!!”

Maan took her hands and tied on the bed pole with the same silky belt, moved farther and looked at her bare front shamelessly.

Maan came towards Geet in slow stride, scaring the hell out of her. He came super close, smiled and his finger played with the rim of her panty “Maan”. Maan placed wet kisses all over her body, Her lips, chin, hollow of her neck. He looked into her eyes as he played with her curves. He licked her tip, while his eyes were not leaving  her eyes. their eyes stayed locked as Maan had her one curve in his mouth and other being played by his fingers.

Shyness and hesitation of Geet started turning into desire. She started losing herself to his touches. He moved down to  roll his tongue around her belly button. Shyness took backseat and the passion and desire for him started taking over her “Ahh Maan”

“You like it,” he paused. Maan could see her restlessness for his touch

“Bolo you like it” “hmm” he kissed her bottom lips above her panty, as his on hand went inside the tiny piece to feel her wetness

“Ummm” she moaned in pleasure. Maan smiled and made some distance

“Maan please” Geet moaned, only encouraging him. He sucked her all through, taking her to ecstasy.

He moved down to place sensual kisses all over her bare leg, very slowly sucking and licking each piece of her skin “Maan please, please Maan” her desire and want completely took over her shyness. Maan moved up and held her panty in between his lips, stretched it and looked at her face

“Please” she begged “Please, please” she did not know what she wanted. She was just dying for him to do whatever he wanted with her.

Maan in one go pulled her little piece out of her and kissed her there hard and forced his tongue inside her. “Uff Maan” Geet only wanted more and more. Maan was harsh, Geet was dying for more. 

He at last released her from bondage, picked her up and threw on the bed. Geet smiled as he completely undressed himself and her. He sat on her, rolled  his finger inside her while other hand kept playing with her curves. Geet raised herself up in want of more and more. Maan slipped two, then three fingers and Geet simply lifted herself for wanting him to ruin her the way he wanted. When she was loose enough, Maan took out the protection, placed it and went inside her with a thrust. 

“Aaaa” Geet screamed as he broke her virginity. 

“Scream baby, scream” he started increasing the force of his thrust as he settled well inside her

“Aaa aa” “Scream.. I love it. It’s a soundproof room and no ones allowed anywhere near.. scream aloud” and he increased his pressure and speed inside her, rubbing her bulges and tips mercilessly. Moving forward and biting them intermittently. The room was filled with Geet’s scream and moans. It was simply music to Maan’s ears.

They went on and on for long hours. Geet’s bottom was sore, her pink tips swollen, her lips swollen yet she was ready to give in to him the moment he placed his hand on her body. As if she had been captivated and enchanted by his magical act of seducing her.

It was 4 am. Maan was sitting with Geet on his lap. There was no need for any clothing piece between them, none asking for it. 

“You tied me, what if I tie you” Geet said casually just to tease him as she roamed her hand one his front.

“We are one Geet. I am yours, you are mine. Humare beech kya sharmo haya. In the closed room, it’s our world completely. Do with me whatever your heart says. I will not judge you. You are now completely part of me. The way I show my right to you, you will show your rights to me.” Geet snuggled to his chest, her curves crushed to his strong body, did she even mind. She loved melting into the strong broad body of her husband.

“well, we deserve a celebration”

“Now what for”

“for you, throwing your shyness away” “When was I shy?” she said playing her hand on his body

“Achcha…’when was I  shy?’ who is saying… after making me work so hard to get you out of it. At a point, I felt i was a Demon to a delicate angel”

“You are not allowed to judge my husband” He turned her and again took her lips. She gave in willingly. They again separated after a passionate kiss

“I had though you will take it slow, you will give me some time” she said shifting to settle on him face to face

“What? I waited a whole year, now how slow did you expect me to go?”

He held her and placed her on bed “Well, let’s celebrate this night with Champagne”

“I…” he kissed her lips before she could say anything. He knew what she would say anyways. 

Maan got up and gave her his full body show, and made glasses for them.  Geet was enjoying looking at his shameless show. 

He sat beside her and taught her how to hold the glass. Maan shook the bottle and snapped open the lid of the bottle for champagne to flow up in the air.

Later They crossed their hands with glass and took a sip from each other’s glass

“Cheers”

“Yuk” “Geet, you say Cheers, not Yuk”

She made her face “What’s so fun in this. It’s so sour” He jerked her closer and whispered

“Fun starts after it gets on your head” he winked.

Maan finished his drink, Geet was drinking with snail speed. He took glass from her hand, picked her in his arms, threw her on bed and jumped over her.

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49 thoughts on “Enchanted – Surrender

  1. Very beautiful wedding and very hot and sexy update ,Maan can’t control anymore , can’t blame him love the update ,and this got you 😘🥰🔥🏆👏👌❤️

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  2. Ooohhhhhh…. Passionate… No words… But damn he was really hungry I think… N top of that ge shyness added fuel.. But I loved the bonding n specially how maan shows her full right n gave her the rights too…

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  3. awesome update ……full of maaneet 💓 raja saheb and rani saheba got married again in front of family and kalsia people . somehow dadima and rano understood they hadn’t start their married life so they made them follow marriage rituals strictly 😜 ….. and after that maaneet became one truly ❤ in closed door they are maan and geet ….and they enjoyed their first night in own way ❤ shy geet didn’t think her dearest hubby is so shameless 😉 but she enjoyed that . their bonding is so lovely so beautiful 💞
    waiting for next

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  4. passionate, hot n sizzling update
    maan shows his shameless side to geet n his hot desire for her .
    geet loves his top speed passion for her n his eagerness for become one forever.
    maan said her that that they are different on closed door only own self away from worlds imagination.

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  5. Omg….it was finally Milan of Raja Sahib and Rani Sahibha…Maan had all his patience for a year and the beast is unleashed now…. completely driven to maaneet world…it’s the side of unknown Maan only for his geet..their marriage was completely in front of the people of kalisa who rejoiced every bit of it… waiting to read more ❤️ thanks for the PM

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  6. Awesome update 🥰☺️❤️, marriage rituals, royal wedding all describe lovely ❤️,both become one, geet come to know how bold her rajasaheb is😊🥰
    Thank you for long, passionate,hot update 😊❤️😘

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  7. Hi Anu, hope you and your family are well.
    Thanks for the pm and update

    Chapter 37
    Enchanting update… eloquently written
    so the Haldi ceremony takes place
    liked that the ladies of Kalsia gifted Geet hand made flower jewellery
    aww Geet is eager to talk to Maan
    well dadima and Rano get to know that Maaneet have not started their marriage life
    of cos Rano berated Geet knowing that it was her idea
    Rano warns Geet against doing such silly acts in the future
    alas Rano is unaware of what Geet did in the beginning
    her family would indeed be angry
    now they want to make this marriage with all rules of first marriage
    no wonder dadima and Rano forbid Maaneet from meeting each other
    oh its their wedding day
    there is excitement and happiness all around
    as expected the Royal family gave gifts to the people of Kalsia
    Beautiful bride and handsome groom
    Maan and Geet’s thoughts and feelings were reasonable
    it was lovely ceremony with all rituals performed
    Geet was clearly emotional when he put the vermillion and mangulsutra
    glad that they are one again…..
    great that they are welcome warmly
    ha ha Annie teased Geet
    Maan cannot help but admire his gorgeous bride
    Geet’s nervousness was justified
    not surprised seeing a passionate Maan
    loved this shy Geet and shameless Maan
    though she cribs, she loves him as he is
    Maan is uncontrollable
    finally they become one in all senses
    pleased seeing a bold Geet
    she revels being in his arms
    he cannot get enough of het

    update soon

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  8. superbbb
    i love that everbody made efforts to make this magical for maaneet, not suprised that dadi n rano found out about these two uff
    Aniee was right there is lots n lots pf deewangi more than anyone could imagine… also loved the while maaneet moment very passionate n it couldnt have been any better, beautifully written loved when maan said they are one n truly she has become a part of him, so cute<3

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  9. Beautiful and Erotic Chapter

    Firstly I’m truly sorry for my first comment

    The wedding was beautiful while Dadima and Rano both
    realized that Maan and Geet still have not began their marriage life
    as husband and wife and wanted to make the marriage functions
    as if it was their first wedding
    both Raja Saheb and Rani Saheba just wanted to to spend their time together
    and wow Geet truly sees her husband in a different light
    as he goes all raw and shows his deep love to Geet
    her shyness just provoked him even more to learn her body in every aspect
    while Geet submitted totally to her husband
    that even her shyness vanished and she got involved in their beautiful
    love making

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  10. What a beautiful & passionate update yaar.i never thought to see this side of Raja Saheb. Beautiful reunion. Geet submission & Maan ‘s claim is a different level. Within the 4 walls they are maaneet. That is what i love about maan. He never mix his royal responsibility & also never fail to give equality to his wife. Cant wait for next part. Tq for this lovely update n pls cont soon.

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  11. Awesome.. Amazing… Beautiful… Hot. … Passionate…

    Loved it…

    OMG… It might have been so hard to write all that n to make it feel all so real n sensuous.. Yet not cheap or vulgar..

    Kudos to u.. U have done it really well…

    Their love n bond have grown n now became stronger…

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  12. Finally maneet became one. Beautiful marriage ceremony and hot and passionate suhagarat. Can’t imagine this is the maan who is so strict and serious. Loved maans naughtiness and loving side.

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  13. Hot and passionate update …finally they became one and both of them are enjoying their start….more than Geet maan is too naughty and dint expected him to be this cool …I love the way he balance everything at right time … marriage ceremony was too great and everyone enjoyed well…

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  14. Amazing update yet written passionately and beautifully.Loved the way of expression of the feeling of both of them.

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  15. Sensuous passionate full on romance update

    Handi n marriage part wrote beautifully describing every details so well …. Ohh dadi rano aniee all know maaneet r not one yet n they want to do everything like 1st marriage n so maaneet strictly away from each other

    Maan cant hold himself seeing most beautiful bride… His bride … Well he had waited enough 😉😄

    Geet shyness n maans boldness…. Perfect bland…. U did full justice to passionate part 💓🙌

    Love maans lines “Open your eyes, if you want it as much as I want it. This is ours night, not mine only” … He never fails to treat geet equally … As his true better half … In all n real sense …. Amazing … Hats off to you 🙌🙌🙌

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  16. it was very very very hot 🔥

    it was very passionate .

    Geet was scared and shy too.maan was beyond my expectations .

    it was beautifully written Maan was nothing like any Raja he was fully in love with wants to make her his. After a year they became one .

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