Enchanted – Pouring Heart

Maan got busy with his work, as lots were going on.. Kalsia, Business, New Venture etc. While Geet was busy with her study as well as thinking of how to start on responsibilities he has assigned her. 

She talks to Rajji, “Di, you do not worry, Jiju has promised me and he will send me to London. After his words, Mom Dad are not going to say anything”

Geet felt offended “Rajji, I am your Di and I have taken this responsibility of sending you to London. It’s all under my hand, I will take care, you will go to London ”

Rajji could not say anything but she was really scared. All was going fine, now why Di has taken this responsibility. She herself is a child and free bird. Why has she taken such a serious matter in her hand and why did Jiju let Di.

“Di, you are newly married, I want you to enjoy your married life. Jiju will see into it, you don’t worry”

“Yes, I am newly married to your jiju and that makes your Jiju newly married as well.” She paused and then asked again “You do not trust me Rajji”

“No Di, I trust you. You are my Di.”

“Good now send me all your documents, I will look into it and check with colleges and other places.”

“Di, Jiju has my documents” Geet felt offended, Rajji, her sister, was talking and sharing all serious stuff with Maan and only talking fun with her

“Okay. You will get good news soon.” “Okay Di” Rajji did not say to keep Geet’s heart but she thought of talking to Maan on a side note. It was a matter of her career, relying on such matter on her Di can be risky.

Maan was busy in his important meetings and he never kept his personal phone when on such meetings. 

Meeting was over after two hours. It was seven in the evening. He rushed to his car, settled behind then signaling driver to head on to Mansion. It had been four days, he had been busy and Geet in her thesis. Even in her busy time, if he would have come to her, he knew she would leave everything and come to him. So he did not disturb her. Today she would have submitted something that she was working on, and must be free. He felt excitement of coming home today

He was such an emotionally controlled man before this. He knew he was changing now, but only for Geet.

He checked his cell, and there was a call from Rajji. He called her back

“Hi Jiju”

“Rajji, did Geet not call you yet?”

Rajji hesitated “Yes Jiju she called. She said she will handle things for me but”

“Then why are you worried, when she already told you, she will take care.”

“yes, but if you can only oversee, I know Di will do but she is … I mean..”

“Rajji, Geet is looking into this and she will send you to London, rest assured. Going onwards talk to her on this”

Maan could tease Geet, make fun of her in private, just between two of them. But he cannot let anyone else raise a finger on his wife’s capability. Not just because she was his wife, but the way she has won him back to herself, it was a near to impossible task. He was so determined to punish her in all ways but she, being just herself and keeping her trust in her feelings for him, has won him back. 

Smile formed on his face, she was crazy, she was childish but her capabilities were magical. She can do wonders by just being her own self. And he loved her this way, for his own very purpose 😉😉

Maan reached his room, and then stood at the door. Uff this girl, had she not placed her first-night wish, he would have done what not with her by now. And then her talking to herself and ceiling, simply tortured his hungry heart. One side she acts so tempting and the other side she places conditions. Geet was lost in her own thoughts and talking to her Babaji to help, when Babji sent her help and she was pulled by strong force, landing herself on the strong figure of her husband. Maan pulled her to his embrace. Geet supported herself by holding his shirt then placed her face on his chest to feel his closeness.

“What’s going on?” 

She pouted on his chest “I was thinking”

“Ohh…. you do that too” he teased her she pouted but ignored. Meeting him after four days, she wanted to feel his closeness.

She moved her hand to take them back around his body and looked at his face, feeling his closeness after a break of a few days.. Their eyes met and kept reading each other’s, passion started building, his strong hand spread over her soft petite back and her soft hand pressed his strong back over his shirt. From his other hand, he held her head, bent down and pressed his lips on hers. Geet opened her lips for him and his tongue found its way to her mouth.she pushed her tongue inside his as well. Their tongue kept playing along for long as he pulled her more to him. His hand pressed her back and she tried grabbing his muscles on her palm. They separated after satisfying their thirst a bit. He smiled and looked at her face, she blushed

“I missed you” she pouted

“Stop doing that or I will break my promise and eat you” she blushed even harder and placed her palms on her face, turning her back to him.

He again pulled her to him, she started opening his shirt’s button “you change, i will get dinner table set”

He held her palms in his grip “Who gave you right to open my buttons after stopping me from doing so” 

Geet lowered her eyes “You are upset about that condition”

“I don’t see any reason to be very excited about your fairy tale childish wish” Geet felt he was really pissed off with her condition

She hugged him again “I don’t want to upset you. I won’t stop you now.”

“And I can’t take any step towards our new life breaking your dream. I am fine.”

“No you are not, you are not fine” 

“Geet, I am fine.Shikayat bhi nahi ker sakta apni biwi se. I have never ever complained about anything to anyone. I feel like I can complain to my wife just as you can complain to me. Can I not?”

“Your complaints, your anger, your wish, I am here to embrace them all with pleasure. Ser ankhon pe aapke sare nakhre” There was a pool of love that he could see in her eyes for him. 

Maan held Geet’s hand and made her sit on the bed beside him.

He looked at her and Geet could see vulnerability in his eyes that she had never seen

 “You know, everyone respects me, listens to me, is scared of my decision but still they come to me for their wish, their demand, their problems and I am there to solve them. This has been my life. But I cannot imagine placing my wish on anyone. Never ever could imagine that I am even allowed to think about myself. With so many responsibilities, will it be worth thinking about myself? The answer was no.” Geet’s heart filled with the pain of his suffering. She had a strong desire to cocoon him like a child. The mighty Raja Saheb, but now he was just her husband who needed his wife as support for his inner pain.

Maan then looked at Geet’s face. She smiled at him but he could see the pool of tears held in her eyes. he smiled and held her chin

“Tum bhi toh bachi ho. I have no right to take away your innocence with my burden” he shied and patted her cheeks

“Just stay the way you are. Go get the dinner table ready.”

“I know I am childish and crazy. But by mistake you married me and now I have all rights on all your things, and that includes, your pain, your struggle and your burden. Dare you take away my rights from me” he smiled and shook his head

“You are one of your own kind. Now go get dinner set up. I am hungry”

Geet was setting up the dinner table and cursing herself. Everyone placed their wish in front of him and he always took care of everyone’s wish above his. Now she was the only one he was placing his wish, he wanted her for himself and how stupid of her to deny that one wish of his and place her wish in front of him instead. And he, being him, accepted it. Now even though she takes back her condition, she knew he will not proceed knowing it was her wish.

Now she had a bad urge to shower herself on him. Geet then thought of the responsibilities and then it struck her, apart from the whole world, he was her first responsibility. His happiness and his wishes, his pain and his burden were her first responsibility. If she thinks it that way, she will understand what he meant. 

Maan changed and was coming down to the dining hall. He had been thinking about why he went out of control and confused Geet with his longings. She is just a very young girl, tied in marriage with him. Is it a good idea to burden her with his longings? But on the other side, she was Rani Sahiba of kalsia and they can’t run away from the fact that with this title came ton’s of security concerns. They can target and in the worst case use her. The child in her would not be able to see the real enemy. Anyways, he didn’t want to confuse her so soon and will try to keep things on his check.

Geet was happy with her arrangement when Maan reached the hall and raised his hand and snapped his fingers. Within seconds all servants were gone, leaving the royal hubby wifey alone with their privacy

Before Geet could react, he pulled her with one hand, she came swinging and gluing to his hard chest as he encircled his one hand around her waist to support her petite figure to him.

She smiled and blushed “Why did you send away servants?” He gave a slight hold on her bottom bulge.

“Why, you want them to witness how I spend my private moments with my wife.” Geet smiled and blushed.

“Dinner is ready” she said with shaky lips “hmmm” he pulled her with him as moved to check the items on table.He kept her glued to himself, his one hand, all time having hold around her waist.

Geet’s heart was waving, the way he was holding her to him all while he was moving around the table.

“Such a plain dinner” he complained

“You prefer light dinner.” Earlier Geet used to get a full menu for dinner, all heavy stuff. But then she observed that he only prefers simple and somewhat plain food, especially at dinner. But today he was in the mood to trap her in this.

“Fine. But after such plain dinner, I want something exciting”

“What exciting” she said shyly, somewhat understanding what he hinted at.

“That I leave to you, how you make it exciting” he then pulled her to him, placing his both hands on her bottom bulge and giving them tight press, giving Geet goosebumps all over her. Geet by now was learning , her husband never hesitated to indicate his shameless wishes. She held his both collar and placed her forehead on his chest “Dinner?” she reminded, “hmmm”.

After dinner, Maan took her for a long drive and ice cream treat.

“Thank you. I love ice cream esp. after dinner. Aapke saath long drive me, Thank you” he smiled at her excitement.

As they were on the drive, Geet was looking at him for a long. Things running in her brain 

“I want to know all about you. Your life is so different from mine, I want to know how you grew up, how you became Raja Sahib, who everyone respects. And everything about how you feel about it” 

Maan looked at her and smiled but said nothing, kept on driving. He stopped at an ice cream parlor and ordered ice cream for her and she for him.

“You think I am not good enough to know your life and its struggle” she said, being a little disappointed.

“Being my wife, you have all the rights to know everything about me. But not today, I am in a different mood today. Also my story is very boring, not anything as exciting as yours”

Ohh excitement came up on Geet’s face

“My life, my life is full of excitement” she jumped with all excitement.

He bent, licked her ice cream, rolling his tongue all over it

“I would like to see a sample of your excitement tonight,” he said in a low husky voice. Geet smiled and turned around, not able to take his continuous tease anymore.

He was about to sit in the car when Geet held his wrist, he turned to look at her, raising his eyebrows. Geet pulled him and then pushed him to the wall of the car, surprising Maan. She brodered him from both sides of her hand. Maan was super surprised by her sudden act of bravery “You tasted my ice cream, I want to taste yours” she looked at his lips

Ohh he understood what his little wifey is trying to do. He smiled, “But I finished mine” Geet ignored him and rolled her tongue on his lips. Maan happily parted and let her enjoy the taste of his ice cream. Later he pulled her to him, and sucked her even deeper, gripping her hair in his clutch. Later when they separated, she hugged him tight

“So blessed to have you as my life partner” she was all full of love and admiration for her husband

He kissed her forehead and smiled. Geet was a bit sad in her heart, only if he could say the same for her. She smiled and moved forward, he held her hand “Geet, I am not vocal” he pulled her to make her back hit his front 

“You have to read between the lines of my acts” She placed a kiss on his cheek “Chalen?”

In the car she was cribbing and Maan was smiling listening to her crib like music

“Apne matlab ke baat me, he gets all vocal. Bas mujhe jo sunna hai, usme inkee juban nahi chalti”

Precap – Maan makes a decision. Savitri Devi, not very happy.

Author’s Note – Please do like and comment. 😊

Dear Readers- lots of tough roads ahead for Maan and Geet so wanted to show the slow build up of their relationship. Romance, serious talks and story progress will go hand in hand in upcoming updates.

32 thoughts on “Enchanted – Pouring Heart

  1. Beautiful update dear. Maan and geets bonding understanding and love increasing day by day. She in the process of becoming best wife and rani sahib for her raja sahib. She is accepting all this with nicely. Maan found a person on whose he can rely emotionally. He is strong and responsible person with perfection and geet is childishness and love added excitement in his life.

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  2. Excellent Chapter

    This Chapter held responsibilities, Care and Love
    I truly adored the fact that Maan made Rajji understand
    Geet will handle her trip and find her the best college
    it’s time now that even Rajji start trusting her sister
    and taking her serious
    Geet on the other hand starts thinking about her husband
    as he tells her he is a person that everyone is scared off
    yet all come to him so he can accomplish their wishes
    Geet realize even she without knowing had placed her wish
    before her husband
    I like that she has taken the initiative and kisses him
    Maan must have had a tough and full of responsibility
    life

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    1. Thanks so much dear for always encouraging and commenting. Love your analysis.❤️🤗 Yeah their relation will grow slowly but yes as they are hubby wife, we may see both bold at times. I am trying to capture all flavor of hubby wife relation, hope am able to do it.

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  3. Amazing part.. So finally they are spending time like a couple.. Maan accepted her fully n showing his rights too… Rajji too didn’t trust her capabilities.. She cross checked with maan but loved the response he gave.. It shows how much he respect her..

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    1. Yeah it’s all about Marriage and husband wife relation, complains, fights, expectations, respect, love, trust, and standing for each other in tough time…. Its about how they carry this journey… thus slow building of relationship. Hope I am able to capture all flavor of this intimate relation. Thanks for reading and commenting.❤️

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  4. superb
    geet has long way to go n lrove herself n i see already that happening with maan beside her
    rajji’s case says all…i love how maan is putting all his trust on geet
    he has forgiven her n he is toatally smitten as well..she won him with her true self, i liked how she knows what her hubby prefers..i love naughty maan in between..his self with geet is so adoring
    geet wants to know about maans journey of becoming raja saheb …she truely wants to be his other half in all senses and all the naughtiness n cribbing maan does with her implies that he has accepted her as his other half
    loved the ice cream romance n cribbing geet ..sooo soo cute

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  5. Loved this part where maan opened his heart to his wife and she was disappointed Knowing…she denied his only wish on her stupid dreams…maaneet passionate moments were nice….their icecream date was rocking as usual ❤️ waiting to read more ❤️

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  6. Hi Anu…. Thank you for updating… 🙂

    Chapter 29
    Emotional update…. well written
    so Maan and Geet are busy respectively with work and college
    glad that Geet is thinking about her responsibilities that Maan assigned to
    great that she called Rajji and spoke to her regarding her college admission in London
    Geet feeling offended with Rajji’s response was justified
    nice that Geet assures her
    alas Rajji was skeptical
    despite telling Geet she trusts her, Rajji called Maan
    aww Maan was excited to meet his wifey
    hmm Maan is changing but only for Geet
    as expected Maan told Rajji to liaise with Geet going forward regarding this issue
    admire that Maan will not let anyone raise on Geet’s capability because she has won him back
    ahh just thinking about Geet brings a smile on Maan’s face
    she is indeed crazy and childish but maturing yet is unique
    she bring laughter, happiness and color in his life
    Maan cannot help but admire his wifey
    but her condition of their first night is holding him back
    adore Maan teasing Geet
    Geet just basks being in his arms…
    intense passionate kiss that portrays their love and yearning for each other
    ahh naughty Maan and shy Geet….
    oh she opens his buttons
    his question was reasonable
    Maan’s taunt was understandable
    however he will not break her dream
    he had a point that he can only complain to his wife
    liked her response… she is ready to embrace everything with pleasure
    at least she notice the vulnerability in his eyes
    pleased that Maan opened to Geet
    sad that he had could never put his wish on anyone nor think of himself
    his responsibilities was above this
    now he has Geet in his life
    good that Geet understood Maan and will be his support for his inner pain
    Gosh Maan does not want to take away Geet’s innocence with his burdens
    he wants to her stay as she is
    wonderful that she warned him not to take her rights away from her
    finally she realised that she was stupid to deny his wish
    but she cannot take it back
    loved that she understood that he is her first responsibility
    Maan’s thoughts were well portrayed
    well Geet has noticed Maan’s preferences
    Maan never leaves an opportunity to tease Geet
    Shameless Maan…..
    happy that they spend time together
    Geet naturally has right to know all about Maan and his life
    wow bold Geet showed him the sample of excited
    their relationship is going from strength to strength
    she is correct that she is blessed to have him as a life partner
    he may not be vocal but his actions show his feelings
    agree with Maan that she has to read between the lines of his acts

    curious precap
    update soon

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  7. Beautiful part
    Loved the way their relationship is progressing little
    Rajji can’t see Geet taking responsibility as she has never seen her with that I guess
    Geet will need lots of things to see and hope she manages and make Maan proud
    Cute moments between maaneet
    Cont soon

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  8. Oh I loved loved loved the update. I’m sorry for late comments but have been down with flu and what not. But haven’t missed reading the update even in my drowsiness with the cough syrup effect🤣 ! I’m so loving their romance specially love the way Maan has opened up to her. He has shes his image from the macho gentleman outside and is so carefree with Geet. This is happening only because of Geet’s bubbliness. It has made him like her and because of his fondness he is able to tease her n wat not. & the ass holding scene is my gawddd hot 🔥 trust me wen I say this I recently saw a meme on twitter, it was of a couple’s pre wedding photo shoot whre the guy is holding the bride’s rear… I couldn’t help but imagine Maan of Enchanted doin it to Geet, and right next I see it in the update 🙈 its hot when a guy does that u know. Loved loved loved it and plssssss update soonnnb

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    1. Ohh take care and get well soon. Thanks for commenting, always look forward to it. The way you summarize your thought on the update is really fun to read.❤️❤️And give me good insight of how it is going 🤗

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  9. very nice update
    with passing time bond of maan n geet becoming strong
    geet feels herself stupid seeing maan’s longing for her
    geet trying but she knows maan wont take next step

    sorry for late

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  10. awesome update . geet talked to rajji about her education but rajji was not ready to trust geet’s capabilities though she clearly not said it but geet understood . rajji called maan and he too told her that geet took the responsibility but he didnt like it that someone is doubting about geet’s capabilities cos he knew about it . in front of geet maan is only maan not raja sahib so he blurted out that all places their wish in front of him but he never did it , first time he told his wish to geet cos she is only his , geet realized everything and she asked him about his life , its good that geet understood maan is her first responsibility . maaneet spent some lovely time ❤
    waiting for next

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  11. Enchanted is my fav. He understands that she is young to be burden with lifes problems. But her position itself burdend.

    As you mentioned they had a long and jumppy journey ahead, so we will wait for that fastening our seatbelt.

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  12. Don’t know why am unable open updates in my wordpress app…. it’s only opening in chrome but am unable to comment there

    So here am posting my comment Read all the pending updates Really loved it It refreshed my mind from my hectic schedule Waiting for more updates

    Thank You -Kriti Arora

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  13. Interesting…

    They are growing as partners… He is slowly opening up to her…

    It is only fair that even he gets to wish n demand..

    They have both fallen so deep n irrevocably in love with each other…

    I loved the last line.. Khud k matlab k liye he is vocal.. Hahaha.. It’s so true for most cases..

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  14. Maan is changing all because of good geet he Is excited to r go home he can’t control his emotions,dadama was right geet will make him to fall in love and learn to live for himself
    Rajji doubt abt geet is justified because of geet previous stupidity and childishness so not to trust geet with her career is understandable ,maan saw her seriousness and dedication so he is sure his wife won’t fail rajji hope others will give her a chance andam sure she will surprise them

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  15. Lovely update

    Geet want to share responsibility n called rajji but rajji got scared as her di will be looking after her london trip 😆 so much trust on her di 😂 poor geet understand that

    Maan assured rajji taking his wife side as he very well know he cant let others thinks low about his wife … Awesome

    Maaneet romance … Closeness increasing day by day… Maan opened up with geet little n said about him briefly n geet regret again puting her wish ignoring his wish … Lovely part… Amazingly written 👏

    Geet wants to know about maan fully but maan was not ready to share it now …. Like geet complain about his saying not vocal …. Last lines 🤣🤣🤣 superb

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  16. Geet was never serious in her life. After becoming rani sahiba, she is learning lots of things. Both have 10years age gap. It’s will take time for geet for understanding maan fully

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