Enchanted – His Version

Raja Sahib had canceled his foreign tours  but then he had to take care of stuff in India. So he was on a week’s tour to different places. Geet got busy in her studies as her tests were going but at night would definitely miss her Raja Sahib. 

She would blush on herself remembering his teasing talks, how he had held her possessively as if she was his “Of course you are silly” she hit her head. She would be mesmerized by the way he talked, he dressed. How bold he was, the thought brought another layer of blush on her. 

Every night, she would hold either her pillow and get lost in the little moments that they have spent together. 

“Why does he have to go on tour every now and then” she would crib when she missed him a little too much.

The other day, she went to his wardrobe and touched his clothes with her hand, dip and face inside and took his fragrance. for a moment she felt he was there and holding her from her waist.

“Geet stop this craziness” she would scold herself and then again get lost in him.

As Geet would keep revising their moments and his each act and words again and again, she was stuck at his comment on her thought of romance

“Nice, but different than mine”  – what did he mean by that? 

“He is Raja Sahib, Geet. He must have some grand thought on Romance, maybe like showering flowers from a chopper, like in movie Lamhe, or surprise trip in cruise or something very grand.”

She kept thinking “Did I fail in impressing him? No no, I felt he appreciated it and liked it. Maybe it didn’t match his level but he did like it” Geet was restless and at last thought of giving him a call. It had already been 6 days and she was missing him as well. 

“Is it fine to call him?” she again hit her head “Geet he is your husband in real, any wife can call her husband” So after several trial of yes and no, she at the end pressed the call button on his number

Raja sahib’s tour had been successful and he was relaxing in the balcony of his royal hotel room. He had been so busy and when on work tours he had an old habit of not calling home. 

But tonight he was in a relaxing mood and was watching the city lights and movements from the tenth floor of the hotel balcony and a smile adorned his face. In relaxed mode, he could not help but remember the beautiful face of his wife. How in her own way she had arranged an evening for him, Dinner and Dance. He was a sophisticated person and dealt with the world that way. But for his life partner he had his own different idea. For him, this relation was most personal, it was a relation where he can bring out his complete inner raw self, live his real life in this relation. 

He was lost in his wife’s sweet childish idea of romance, he did not know how the innocence of her would be able to handle his idea. He had held his sophisticated self to her till he was not sure of going ahead in relation. But now that he was sure, his sweet little wife had to deal with him. He was lost in her thought when he received  her call.

“Hello, how are you doing?” Came his deep voice in Geet’s ear, filling her heart with contentment.

“Now I am good.” slipped from her. He smiled at her choice of words. She never missed her chance to show how much he mattered. That was her natural way to make him know how special he was for her.

“How have you been? How was your tour” she enquired further

“Great. So how did you happen to call me” His question somewhere hit Geet on wrong chord. Did he not appreciate her calling him while he was on tour.

“I am your wife, you didn’t like me calling you. Yeah you must be busy, you have tons of big stuff to do and my stupid talks are only going to distract you” she was almost on tears. 

“Geet, calm down. I am not busy. We can talk” Geet did not say anything and he knew, by now her tears must be rolling down. The thought of it troubled him

“Geet” “Hmm” “wipe your tears then we’ll talk”

“I am not crying” “Hmm.. I know. Wipe your face first” this much of his care and smiled formed on her face “Hmm… done”

“Hmm.. So how did you call” It’s then she remembered 

“woo… I have a question…”

“Hmmm.. go ahead”

“you said your idea of romance is different, I want to know, what different? It’s just stuck in my head.. i have been thinking and it’s just stuck” Maan felt he will laugh out loud but then he had a cunning smile.

“yeah it is different, very different than yours” he had wide smile 

“Sachi, i want to know” Uff what’s his fault in getting ideas if a deer itself wants to land in front of hungry lion

“I can’t tell you” he defo was enjoying  “Boliye na.. please mujhe neend nahi aayegi”

“I can’t tell you but will show you live” ohh poor girl did not know, he was laughing at cost of her innocence

“Really? when?”

“On the night of the day i reach there”

“When are you reaching?” There was excitement in her voice. When had she expected, Raja Sahib would ever talk on such a topic, that too on phone with her. 

“Tomorrow afternoon. Now Good night. Take a nice sleep today” 

“You are coming tomorrow” Geet shouted on phone itself

************* 

Next day Geet didn’t want to go to college but she had to. If she does miss it, she will get some high level of taunt from the one she is planning to drop it.

It was 3pm and Geet was done with college and ready to run home. Her husband must be back and she could not wait a minute to meet him. But as she was on college ground, she saw Rajji running towards her

“Diii” 

“Rajji, you here?”

“Di, you are in Delhi and didn’t come to meet us. So I decided to kidnap you for a day” 

“Noo” came out from her lips

“Di, you don’t want to come home, meet Mom, dad and Veerji. You are my surprise for them”

“woo Raja Sahib” 

“Di, are you really you? Ohh God so much into your hubby. But you are coming with me. Just one day Di, you  can’t leave Jiju? I bet he will have some peace without you”

And Rajji pulled Geet with herself. “Rajji, listen dear, he is coming from tour today, after a week”

“Just one day Di. OMG, Does it happen this way after marriage? Just see at you.” 

After half an hour, Geet somehow managed to call Raja Sahib. At least, he won’t be worried.

******* 

Maan had settled and was keeping himself busy. He got his wifey’s call. Well he always knew where she was, her security was managed under his supervision. The way it was setup, Geet never felt it was there. And being Geet, lost in her world of Raja Sahib, many a time forget that there actually is any security in place for her.

“Hi, Raja Sahib. When did you reach?”

“Hmm, I have reached couple of hours back”

“Mmm.. I can’t come home today.. woo”

“Geet, I know you are with Rajji. And you are visiting your parents after long, so enjoy”Geet did not say anything. She should be happy to visit her home after so long but her heart was left in Mansion.

“Geet, Enjoy. I am fine” 

“’I am not” slipped from her lips. Maan smiled. This girl was making him feel things he never did. 

********* 

Geet’s family welcomed her and for sure a smile came on her face after seeing everyone and of course Rajji complained as how she had to pester Di to come here.

Brij and Rajji both teased her to no end. the way she looked like a Deewani about each mention of Raja Sahib. 

Brij Teased “But Geet we are really sorry to have married you to man with such age gap. You must be wishing someone young”

“Veerji, my husband is just 31 and it is the perfect age for marriage. And he is very much young and dynamic.” Geet was almost aggressive in support of her hubby

“OOOooooo” both Brij and Rajji teased 

“Veerji” Geet pouted. Brij came to her and pulled cheek of his Jhalli sister and left the two sisters for girly talks

“By the way Di, Jiju must always be busy with his responsibilities as he has so many. He is so mature for even his age. I mean, does he even know what romance means or does he even have time for those, like gifts, showering flowers, cards, sweet talks, like most newlyweds do. I fear, do you get bored with him” Rajji was provoking Geet. Seeing Geet’s blush every time at mention of her husband, they had a good idea of how badly she was in love with him. But all the tantrums that she had placed in start, they would not leave a chance to pull her leg

“Rajji, you are talking a little too much. He is your Jijju. And yes he does not have these childish ideas of romance. His is different and his ideas are different”

“Ohhh different. What is the difference? Di”

That’s what he would have told me today, but you brought me here” Geet spoke to herself.

“Rajji bas ker, enough pulling my leg” Geet scolded and Rajji came to her and hugged her tight

“Di, we are so happy for you.”

Later Rano pulled Geet separately 

“Kya Mumma… aise kinare kyun bulaya”

“Geet, now you are married. So what are your plan, family plan” 

Geet eye popped out “Mumma” 

“Geet you are married now. So what are you guys thinking, planning for a baby, or using protection. Does Raja Sahib need an heir? They have a kingdom, you know. And he is a mature man, not childish like you, he must have some idea of what he is thinking in that direction” 

“Mumma, what are you talking about? It’s not even 1 year of my marriage”

“Geet, even I am not in favor of your being a mother so soon. Beta, I just want to ask, have you both talked on this? Husband wife should come to the same page on such a decision. Maybe, you are using safety and he does not know. It’s not like that, right?” 

Geet was all red with what her mother was talking. What will she say that they are far away from reaching the point her mother is saying? 

Her hubby’s small touch made her speechless, she was at that stage of relation. They were taking their relationship in their own way and she did not want anyone, not even her mother to judge their relationship. It was between her husband and her.

“Mumma we are on the same page” Geet ended with that. Rano was fine, she just wanted to make sure her crazy daughter was not doing any silly stuff in her marriage. Less does she know, she already has done blunder but was brilliantly fixing her mistake.

It was dinner time and Geet went to kitchen, She was surprised to see ranges of variety her mother has prepared 

“Mumma, these many variety for me” Rano shook her head and patted Geet’s cheek without saying a word as the doorbell rang.

Rano went to the hall and Geet behind her – who could be at this hour., thought Geet. Brij opened the door and Geet was shocked and surprised at the same time seeing her husband there. His eyes met hers and she was red from top to bottom. Her heartbeat was uncontrollable. How can he be so calm and hug each one casually and bend down to take her Mom and Papaji’s blessings while she, on other hand, is overwhelmed by so many feelings. He and she, together in her house premises for the first time. He is here as she is here, so that means she is somewhat important to him. Rajji too went and hugged him tight, Geet made a face and Maan did not miss that and gave lopsided smile to her and Kissed Rajji’s forehead.

“How are you?” he asked Rajji and gave a look to Geet raising his eyebrows. Only this much of his act and Geet’s heart started floating and flushing her blood up and down her whole body.

Maan took a seat and the whole family gathered him. Geet was about to sit but Rano pulled her to kitchen 

“So you did all this for him?” 

“And for who do you think I am going to do all this effort. It’s only for damad Ji”

“I thought, for me” Geet made a face. Rano caressed her cheek “Haan baba, for you too. But if Raja Sahib is coming… chal chod, help me decorate the table. ”

Geet helped her mother to set up the table in the best way with what all they had.

The dinner was delicious, and Maan made sure to appreciate all efforts Rano “But Mumma, itna kuch kerne kee jaroorat nahi thi. How will i come everytime if you take so much effort for my dinner” Geet was floored when he said Mumma to his Mom. It felt so beautiful. It made her feel he was part of her family as well

“For you, I can do it everyday, every time.” love and respect simply oozed out from Rano. Geet was seeing how beautiful a bond he has made with her family and she knew she has been lacking in this part. His family loved her very much but in return she has not put more from her side. They simply loved her for what she was but definitely more work was needed from her side.

Later Geet and Maan were sent to her room. Again a surprise for Geet, she did not know when Rajji arranged her room with a new velvety bed sheet, New water jar, new glass, fresh curtains, and beautiful flower vase. Room got a wonderful new look. Ok it has all to do with the visit of her Great Husband. Maan entered after a while and closed the door behind him. Geet looked at him and freezed where she was. He came close to her held her wrist and pulled her close to his chest in jerk, making her head land on his chest, her heart beating fast.

“aap yahan?” came her low voice

“Kyun achcha nahi laga” Geet smiled, looked at his face and placed finger on his lips

“It means a lot to me. You can’t even imagine how special you have made me feel”

“aana to pada. I have to keep my promise” he said, tracing his finger leisurely on her face and with the other hand pressed her waist over her kurti. She held his shirt for support and to control her overflowing emotions and feel

“What promise?” she said with shivering lips

“You forgot? I promised to tell my version of romance” Geet’s eyes widened “You came for that? How will you show your way here, in my house?”

“Why not?” he pulled her to him, even closer, blew air on her face from his mouth, making shiver run down her spine “I only need good privacy and you, to show my version, samjhi”  he said in his heavy husky voice.

Geet kept quiet, she knew now he would only trap her in his words and acts. He kept keenly looking at her, with shivering lips, smile adorned her red turned face.

He slipped his one hand inside her kurti, and with his other hand brought her closer and pressed his lips on hers. Geet was melting ice cream with his passionate, possessive touch. She opened her lips for him and he pushed his tongue inside her mouth and his hand went up and snapped, opened the hook of her bra and pressed her globes hard from his hands. He kept moving her along with him till she was supported by the wall. There was no hesitation in his act “Maa-aan” she clutched his collar as he continued sucking her lips. He was nowhere the Raja Sahib anyone else in the world knew. He was a man possessed with desire for the girl in front of him, his wife.

They separated “Do you want to know my version of romance?” Geet could not say a word but simply hugged him, placing her head on his chest. 

“Yes or No” he pulled her to him in a raw harsh way. Geet hugged him tight 

“I want to kiss you” she said in his ear “Why are you asking, Biwi ho meri” Geet was falling for the way he took and gave rights – Pati hoon tumhara and Biwi ho Meri.

She looked at his lips and first placed peck on his lips and then nibbled his lower lip. He turned their position, placed himself on the wall and her in front and placed his hand behind his head – ‘Show me how you can kiss me’ Geet moved forward and nibbled his lips and then pushed her tongue inside his mouth, he gave in for her demand. Ohh it was so beautiful to kiss her damn handsome husband. She kept going on and on as his hand played with the tip of her curve, prompting her to make her kiss deeper and deeper. 

He then looked at her, “that’s my idea of romance- Play it real” he winked. Geet bit her lip as shyness covered her again “How shameless you are, no one in world could imagine” her lips shaking with shyness

“This me is only for you” she blushed but then he pulled her again, pressing his big hardened manhood between her thighs above her cloth, where she was all flooded with warm slimy sensation caused by their togetherness“ And mind you, only this one for you”.

26 thoughts on “Enchanted – His Version

  1. Beautiful and Mesmerizing Chapter

    Raja Saheb has gone on business tour
    while Geet is totally lost in their time together
    and it’s great that she is missing him
    also thinking what his idea of romance is
    and finally she phones her husband
    while on the other side Maan has been thinking
    about Geet
    knowing now about her innocence just brings out
    the mischievousness in him and the need to get close
    to his wife
    it seems Geet’s family already invited Raja Saheb
    even before Rajji came to pick Geet up
    I loved how Raja Saheb have accepted his in laws as his own
    family calling Geet’s mother Mumma
    hopefully now Geet herself will give more to her in laws too
    wow Maan showing Geet just how different is his way of romance
    and I think Maan enjoys the fact that Geet gets so shy

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  2. I so loved this part so maan did think about his wife too in leisure time and the way they interact through phone was nice so he promised his different idea of romance and he kept that promise too …aww poor geet never had her heart to go to her home that too after craving for her husband…and knowing he will be back that day…then there came a surprise he too joined her in her home and she was overwhelmed with his acts and presence and the effort he make for relationship waiting to read more ❤️

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  3. ohmy geet is totally gone case…a total deewani…seems like in future maan has to take her along with him on tours hehehe all she think about is him…she is lost in the thoughts what his idea of romance be like n i lobed that maan too was thinking about his pretty wify….lovely fone convo…but rajji drags geet with her to her parents n maan cames as suprise to her..to fulfill his promise…..he has bonded really nicely with geets family while geet didnt put much efforts to know his side!! cant blame her she was lost in him all the while…
    here maan shows geet his idea romance n kissed her…i love how he claims meri biwi ho and tmhari pati hun too….geet too kissed him n he shows her how much he desires her 😉
    lobed it totally…cant wait for more n more

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  4. hot n passionate update
    maan is enjoying geet’s innocence
    brij n rajji pulling grrt’s leg n enjoying her shyness
    geet is surprise seeing how easily maan giving n taking rights on each other

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  5. Hello Anu….. thank you so much for updating!

    Chapter 27
    Sensational update… beautifully written
    sad Raja Sahib has gone on business tours in India
    of cos Geet misses him and thinks of their moments
    hmm shy Geet and bold Maan
    she is immensely in love with him and her actions reflect that
    her thoughts were justified
    great that she called him
    Maan’s thoughts are understandable
    aww he cannot help but think of his darling wife
    his relationship with her is more personal
    at least he can be real self and live his real self in this relation
    as expected she makes him feel special
    well his question why she called him upsets her
    oh he knows her so well and that she was crying
    her question about his kind of romance was anticipated
    did he not give her glimpse of his version of romance?
    adore this innocent Geet
    liked Maan teasing her
    Gosh he will give her a live demo when he is back
    not surprised that Geet was excited to go home as Raja Sahib will be back
    she even did not want to go to meet her parents
    Raja Sahib indeed knows where she is and wants her to be happy
    but she is clearly not fine being away from her
    glad that she makes him feel that he never did
    no wonder dadima chose Geet for him
    Brij and Rajji naturally tease Geet
    good that she supports her hubby
    so Rano was direct with Geet
    her questions to Geet were reasonable
    Geet responded appropriately
    she was amazed that Raja Sahib came for dinner to her house
    pleased how he blended with her family and respects them
    Geet was in awe when he addressed her mom as mumma
    nice that she realised she needs to make the same effort with his family
    loved when he said “pati ho tumhara and biwi ho meri…”
    finally he shows her his version of romance
    passionate moments
    she had a point that no one can imagine how shameless he can be
    alas this is him only for her…..

    update soon

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  6. Simply mind-blowing update. No one can imagine raja sahib in highly romantic mood. Now we are getting superb maneets scenes and story is getting interesting. Thanks for the password dear

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  7. Thanks for the password… It was terrific… Finally geet understood his idea of romance 😉. Being a raja sahib he so down to earth with her family.. It was already shown before too n now geet get to know he already worked on his relationship with her family.. That’s why they always favored him over her n obviously they knew she is a jhalli…

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  8. Lovely part
    Geet missing maan but also happy that she respected his views on her education and didn’t skip her classes
    Maan’s war of expressing his love to his wife 😍😍😍
    Cont soon
    Thanks for pm

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  9. Very beautiful and romantic update
    Geet is missing her raja sahib
    She called him Ana asked him what is the difference between their way of romance
    Maan is smiling for his wife’s innocence
    Loved the bonding b/w Maan and his IN LAW ‘S
    Loved Maaneet’s sweet little romance

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  10. Sun4u on IF
    Thanks for update and password. Geet is fully in the world of her husband, her raja sahab. Loved the way she is working on redemtion and making her husband feel most important person in her life. Maan on other side showed very down to earth and family woth geets family, sophisticated with world but loved the most how he showed his real self to geet. He is rough, passionate, possessive and raw which is his true self . Love to see shy geet and dominating maan

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  11. Awwww I’m in love with both of their version of love…. Geet’s childish love and Maan’s mature love with a super talented author🤗🤗
    Terrific combo❣️❣️❣️

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  12. Mind blowing update. Geet is full of latoo on Raja sahib . Both their love is unique. One with innocence and other one is full of maturity. I loved how fown to earth was maan to geet family. And the wayy he showed his romance to his wife is mindblowing

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  13. Awesome Part.
    Loved maaneet moments.
    Raja sahib never fails to amaze his biwi
    Loved maan’s bonding with geet’s family.
    Eagerly waiting for maaneet’s more moments.
    Thanks for pw.

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  14. awesome and lovely update ❤ raja sahib went for business tour and his childish wife was thinking about him , she was missing him so much and at last geet called maan , their phone conversation was super lovely and geet wanted to see his version of romance and ofcourse raja sahib fulfilled his promise . rajji took geet to their house and her siblings teased her taking maan’s name , her mother gave her some advise regarding married life . geet was so happy when maan came to her house and she was surprised to see his bond with her family . now maan is ready to show her his version of romance ❤😉

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  15. omg…………if this d version of raja sahib for geet…………hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii marjawan……………geet u r soooooooooooooooooo lucky…………..

    awesome…………..

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  16. Amazing update..

    He doesn’t leave a chance to make her blush n fall for him more..

    Loved the relationship between him n her family..

    His idea of romance is wow! Bold n beautiful..

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  17. Geet going crazy in raja sahib’s absence…
    Loved Maan’s bonding with geet’s family…
    Want to see what efforts geet will put to know n respect her in laws…
    Raja sahib showed his version of romance ❤❤❤❤❤

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  18. Lovely update

    Geet again miss maan as he went for tour …. but keep thinking about him n their little romance

    After thinking a lot she give a call n maan happy with it … Lovely conversation

    Geet was so excited to meet maan n to know his idea of romance but than rajji step in

    Geet even than make maan special by just saying I m not happy … Geet enjoying time with her family but maans presence give her feeling he is part of her family n she is lacking in that matter …

    Maan keep his words n give his real idea of romance … Lovely 😉😍

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  19. Geet iis right. Maan is Totally different person in front of geet. And I m loving it. And u wrote so beautifully, just mind blowing.

    Geet and rano, both r innocent.

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