Enchanted- Starting Into the relation

“Will you marry me.. Phirse?” he looked at her in shock “What?”

As she was sitting on her knees, he kept looking at her, first in surprise with her unique idea and then in his thought

Rating: 1 out of 5.

“My knees are hurting, but if you want to punish me this way it’s fine” Maan bent down and picked her up by her shoulder. Geet got up but was sad, her proposal was rejected by her husband. But then he lifted her chin and their eyes locked

“What do you think marriage is a game?” he asked. It was very sacred relation for him and she has made joke of it and now suddenly want to do it again.

“Not anymore. I know it’s most beautiful relation. But it’s fine if you think it’s not needed. I wanted….”

“Geet, we can’t do same mistake again and again. First you were not fully ready for this relation and we got married. You see the result. As of now, I do not have much trust in this relation and you want us to do it again when one of us is not ready for it” he asked with sincerity and requested her to sit on the bench. Geet gave faint smile, how she has broken him and ruined her beautiful married life with wonderful person.

“But if you are really sincere about this relation, we can do it but..” Geet’s eye brightened, we can do it all she wanted to register

“But?”

“Not now? First I need time to gain confidence in this relation. I will try, I can’t promise. Second, there have to be an occasion when we do it. If we randomly do it out of blue, our reputation will be at stake. Questions will be raised on Kalsia Royal relations. I can’t risk it.”

“So?”

“So, it’s four months left to our first anniversary. If you make me trust into this relation completely by then, we can have this as part of our first anniversary celebration”

Geet stood up with big smile on her face “Thank you.” She was all the while on way back home lost in thinking, how come he got such brilliant idea. He looks so serious types but he has ideas of doing things way around.

For Maan, he had fight between his broken heart and his getting drawn towards her or say a hidden need to get life of normal man, where he can shed his responsibilities. But now that he has decided to give this relation a chance he have to take positive steps towards it.

The drive was quiet. Geet was lost in handling her own jumping heart and Maan somewhere felt lighter at heart. He still didn’t know how he will go forward in relation but strangely he felt light with the decision taken.

Later both took a little break from each other as Raja Sahib had to take look into other stuff and Geet went to the room.

She freshened up, changed to her regular baby blue, polka dot night suit and went in bed. Neend kahan aani thi? She just kept laying there thinking, how will the journey be. Geet kept laying down for long, waiting for her Raja Sahib.

Maan came late in the room and laid on other side of bed and placed the quilt over him. He kept staring at the high ceiling for long

After long came from him “Are you asleep?”

Ohh Geet’s heart jumped “Ji, Ji nahi toh. Not able too.” In the dark of night, they lay on each side of bed. Geet knew he has so many questions, but she now wanted to answer them by acts not words. After a while, she slowly moved towards him, he just kept laying in his place with his eye wide opened. Soon Maan felt her palm on his and she locked it. Her hands were super cold, clearly saying how nervous she was. Maan closed his eyes and locked his hands with hers. His heart not in its place as well. Someone is here for him, to think about his needs. He rubbed his fingers on back of her palm. Slowly her hand was warm and she moved closer and placed her head on his strong arm and closed her eyes. He closed his eyes as well and both drifted to sleep.

Without realization, Maan had much peaceful and longer sleep than he had in his whole lifetime. When he opened his yes, his eye went on the huge round wall clock ‘7 O’Clock’. For man who rises at 4:30 am, 7 am as half day gone. He turned to get up quickly when he felt weight on his arm, he turned to see angelic face of Geet on his arm and she was holding it tight with both her hands. She looked so much of child. He kept looking at her face, which was so close to him. He softly removed the hair flocks from her face. How innocent she looked how can he remember he was hurt from her at that moment. His finger slowly started moving down from her cheeks to near her lips. He stopped his finger there for a while and then moved further down. Geet’s started feeling the sensation, her heart started beating knowing her husband was studying her. She kept her eyes closed, feeling his touch on her but as he kept going down her heartbeat speeded and her breath started becoming heavy. He then removed his hand, got up, sat down and turned other side – What was he doing. Yeh kaisa ehsaas hai, dharkanee itnee tej kyun hai. Does it suit to him, a person loaded with such huge responsibilities?

“Good Morning” she said in low voice from behind

“Hmmm Good morning. I am already late. Need to rush”

Later, after breakfast “Can I drive to college on my own” he thought for a moment and then did a text

“Hmm” she smiled and left to get her stuff. She knew he was man of few words, very few words.

“I will drop you…. Yeh bol dete toh…. But no, he texted his commandos to surround my car. Geet, aise to hua romance” irritated she picked her stuff

“If it goes on like this, whole 4 months he will be doing hmmm hmmm and you will keep giving smile. Nothing more is happening if you leave it on him. Geet get on your own original form, unpe chorda toh ho gaya… Hmmm bas”

Geet went to college in the elegant car her husband gifted her today morning itself.  First he had showed her Ferrari 812, her head went spinning. “Yeh??” she feared she is going to harm the car. Least did she value her random self in front of this exclusive vehicle. Then he got Porsche Macan. She hesitantly sat there, knowing next that will come will be something similar.

 Driving this Royal car was a different feel altogether. He had lacked trust in her still when he presented her anything, he made sure he is presenting it to his wife and it has to be of equal stature to him. Can be higher but not lower. That is the place he had in his mind for his wife. She really has made joke of all his understanding.

Geet was in canteen with her friends “Geet what a car yaar!!”

“Yeah, it’s so exclusive. It’s exported right?”

Geet did not know what to say. Her husband has everything so exclusive and now anything he gives her will be exclusive, that was his inbuilt royal style.

“Yeah it looks so Royal. Geet speak up naa”

Geet took deep breath, she knew he has already introduced her as Rani Shiba in elegant party. That video can anytime be telecasted anywhere. And it’s better her friends know from her or they will be another to be felt cheated by her

“It’s gifted to me” “Gifted this car?”

She smiled and blush already formed her face as his thought surrounded her

“Ohhh Gosh!!! Blush.” Shouted one friend

“Boyfriend?” asked other

“My Husband” she spoke and closed her eyes

“HUSBAND????” they spoke in unison, Geet closed her ears and eyes.

“So you were in vacation to get married? You did not invite you friends”

“Listen” she shouted

“No Geet, we are not. You ignored us in your marriage, never told us you are getting engaged or married. And now you have husband who presented you Porsche Macan”

“I could not call you guys as back then we did not know each other. I got married a month before joining to college”

“wow… all the while you were married? We thought you are such a transparent personality”

“Okay if you all listen I can explain”

“Off course, Porshe Macan wala husband hai, sunna to padega”

“Okay, in that case it was Ferrari 812 GTS first” she smiled

“hainnn tu phek rahi hai”

“Okay leave everything. Who is your husband?”

Geet knew it is going to be another bomb blast on her friends “Raja Sahib of Kaslia Estate”

“WHAATT?” “Geet do you even know who he is? He is nations prominent and one of most influential personality”

“He is my husband. That’s it for me. Aur aajkal naraz chal rahen hai” Geet made her face

“Raja Sahib is your husband. Yeah I remember he got married few months back. Bride and Grooms pics were not released”

“Really Geet??Raja Sahib is your husband.” They were in shock would be less. Super-duper shocked they were

“And he was presenting Ferrari in upset state. Khush honge toh? Pinky was lost

“Tohhh” Geet blushed “one kiss on my cheeks” and closed her eyes

“Yaar Narazgi is better” all girls and boys laughed

“wait wait wait..” came from one of friend “You work in KE under Maan Singh Khurana. He is Raja Sahib’s employee, right? You said you don’t know Maan Khurana”

Now Geet was in fix. She did not know if she could reveal Maan Khurana was Raja Sahib. It was security codes and she could not risk her husband security.

“Okay… this is not my life story session. Let’s go to class”

In the evening, Maan was looking at his watch every now and then. No he was not waiting for his employee Geet but his wife.  Why is he feeling so restless for her, this is not him? And she still has to answer her act, but irrespective of all this his heart was waiting for her today.

“Main badal raha hoon. Yeh Geet mujhe badal rahee hai”

This whole new feeling was so alien to him. This restlessly waiting for his wife, getting lost in her in morning, wanting to feel her. What was this? Does he even have bandwidth for such feelings that was seeping inside. What if she breaks him again? How deep was her love that she has realized for him now? But against all this his heart was getting pulled to his wife, who came up with stupid idea of proposing him with wild flower, who was sleeping like a child on his arms, who was trying to tie sari to impress him. Smile formed at corner of his lips. Ohhh he was getting drawn towards her like moth to fire, it was beyond his control.

Geet was in office exactly on time. She was so eager to report to her boss directly after so many days. She knocked his door “May I come in”

“Come in” and his restless heart came to peace

He asked her to take the seat “I have something important to talk to you”

“Yes Sir”

“Geet, now that we both know our relation, you should know that you are equal partner in this company with me. One percent up.”

“Noo” Geet did not like this. All she wanted to focus now was wining him.

“So as per that, you should not work here as intern. You are now part Board of members of KE”

“No, I do not want all those things. I am happy working under you this way. Now your intern and later your report”

He kept looking at her. Okay he did not have habit of explaining his words. People have to get what he said. Geet shied knowing now his decision was taken. He for sure have vast vision of things than her but she thought of her small-small happiness. Her eyes filled with tears and it pained him. He just can’t get up and wipe it off but it made him restless

“Wipe your tears we can talk. I can compensate this change. What do you want?”

“I anyways don’t get your time. You are so busy. This was one way I could reach to you.” There was long silence and then after long thought came from him

“I will try to give time to our relation.” “hmmm when you get busy, you forget everything. I am going to be the first one” what could he say in that, she has been capturing his mind these days

“I keep my words.”

19 thoughts on “Enchanted- Starting Into the relation

  1. Again Another Beautiful Chapter

    I’m liking the fact that Geet has become serious
    about her relation with her husband
    and its also true Maan has been deeply hurt by his wife
    he needs time
    yet at the same time he also knows he has to make his marriage work
    make his wife happy
    oh Geet’s friends were going crazy about her vehicle than
    knowing she is married to Raja Saheb
    but now I admire her as she thinks about security first
    before talking and letting out the fact that Maan Khurana
    is Raja Saheb

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  2. wonderful update
    geet knows that she is at fault from first place
    now she trying seriously to win her husband
    maan is deeply hurt by geet but still taking care of her n respecting her
    but it is very hard for maan to accept their relation soon n make it normal

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  3. I m so loving this progress in their relation geet is trying her level best to mend things between them.aww maan had a peaceful sleep ever knowing there is someone to take care of his needs.. waiting to read more ❤️

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  4. Hello Anu…. thanks for updating!! this is one of my favourite stories!

    Chapter 24
    Captivating update….. outstandingly written
    Maan is clearly amazed with her question
    she is indeed sad that he rejected her proposal
    Maan’s question was reasonable
    at least she now knows that marriage is a beautiful relation
    Maan’s response was justified
    great that he was honest and sincere with her
    can understand that he needs time to gain confidence in their relationship
    he was correct that they also need an occasion to do this as their reputation will be at stake
    Gosh in four months it will be their first anniversary
    liked Maan’s idea…… hope she will be able to make him trust her
    glad that Maan is taking positive steps towards their relationship
    pleased that Maan is feeling light hearted
    admire Geet yet again taking the initiative
    now he has someone who will think about his needs
    Aww they fell asleep with her in his arms
    nice that Maan has a peaceful sleep
    Maan cannot help but admire his wife
    sad that Maan feels that he cannot think of himself
    yes he does have responsibilities but he needs to live his life as well
    hmm Geet was expecting that Maan will drop her to college
    she is right that she needs to get to her own original form
    wow he gifted her a Ferrari and then a Porsche
    Geet’s hesitation was anticipated
    so Maan ensures that she has something equal or above to him
    as expected Geet’s friends question her about her car
    finally Geet reveals she is married and that her husband is Raja Sahib of Kalsia
    her friends were naturally shocked
    good that Geet managed to end the convo as she knows she cannot reveal that Maan Singh Khurana was Raja Sahib
    loved that Maan was eagerly waiting for Geet to come to the office
    aww he cannot help by think of her
    Maan’s thoughts were well portrayed
    nice that he is changing
    he needs to consider himself
    not surprised that Geet was upset that Maan said that he can no longer work as an intern
    well she is now a board member of KE
    its understandable that Geet wants to be with Maan and will only get this at KE
    oh he is in pain seeing her tears
    wonderful that he assures her and promised herthat he will give time to their relationship

    update soon

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  5. wowww loved it toatlly
    maan couldnt help getting drwan towards geet loved the morning scene where he way studying his wify…..
    so maan actually didnt deny marrying her again but he donesnt want make mokery of this marriage…he still is hurt but he is willing to give a chance….loved how he is realizing that he is changing and geet is changing him…
    loving geet no less actually…really appreciate how she is devoted to him now…. wow expensive car but she wants a kiss on cheek..i could see that coming already….her friends seems to be understanding…haha pinky comment was funny lol
    here maan wants to make her his equal in comapny but geet knows this means less time with him ..even her tears are pricking his heart…so he says he keep his words ..indeed….like how he was waiting for his wify n its her in his heart all the while..truly makes me happy for them
    hoping to see them spending more time toghter now

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  6. Beautiful part
    Maaneet trying to give each other chance
    Hope in this 4 months time Geet is able to make maan believe in her love for him and spends time with each other
    Cont soon

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  7. Wonderful update.Maan is ready to give her a chance to gain his trust.Also he is falling for her His heart is slowly melting.when he said she is his equal partner and need not do work as intern she chose to work under him and get. His time wonderfully written.hope Maan forgives her and start his life with her

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  8. Both are ready to start but kings have their protocols. But he is more than eager to have someone in his life just for himself. He wanted to be loved without condition and without any doubt.

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  9. Interesting…

    Geet proposed maan…

    She knew that he is hurt by her actions but he is still trying to give their relationship n her a chance..

    She is trying …

    He is feeling for her… All alien.. But dude even u r allowed to feel happy..

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  10. Geet proposed in dreamy way but for maan it was not like that

    He understand n believe in marriage n not liking that geet taking it as lightly

    I like the way u wrote maan view on remaariage n again for geet happiness he agreed to full fill her on 1st anni if she make him trust her … Maan is so thoughtful person … Always comes with solution 🙌…. His whole life he did this n now he is going to live his life little with geet

    Geet happy with maan idea n all ready to impress maan …. Maaneet sleeping time closeness n morning scene … Beautifully written … Love it 💓

    Maan explain geet as now she is rani her place in co. change n with tears maan can’t help but to promise to spend time with her 😃

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  11. Amazing update. Geet has come a long way in her relation though still childish but yet serious with her feelings. Loved the dialogue “…ye Geet mujhe badal rahi hai” reminded me of the serial ufffff. Maan needs a life of his own…so grt going. Thanks for the update.

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