Enchanted – One Chance

Geet attended her college and then diligently worked in her office in her evening shift. Maan could not be in office as he had more important meeting to handle. Late evening when he reached home he directly went to his Gym. He had been thinking all while about his wife aka Geet. He knew he has no escape; he could not deny the relation they had. What should he do, he did not know. Forgive her and move ahead. Earlier he was determined to punish her. But what will it yield ultimately. Give her pain and his revenge will be taken. She was after all his wife his family; does he really want to revenge someone who is his family. She was his wife, one relation that was his. But then why had she cheated on him as a wife, it pained him. But then the tears in her eyes also pained him. Why did her tears pained him when she had hurt him so badly?

Deep within he wanted to convince himself to go forward with her, but her deeds have hurt him badly. He was in dire need of partner, living all life loaded with responsibility. On top of it, her being around, all ready to start life with him, all ready to surrender, her beautiful eyes, her cute antics they were taking his heart away. Should he hold on to his anger but his heart wanted to give her one benefit of doubt. It was his own selfish need.

“was it all her childish act? Am I being too hard?” he was confused with one side his melting heart and one side his pained heart.

He needed to give time to himself. Assigned her workload and got busy with important stuff. He did not have luxury to think too much about himself.  He needed to sort out his feeling and his pain.

Geet’s exam has approached and her workload was heavy as well. She wanted to focus on both, do good and be sincere. That is at least something that he will appreciate. She was going directionless. How to bridge the gap if he was not even giving her anytime?

Geet had worked great, he along with being busy did not miss chance to check her work. Why he did, he had no answer. For Geet, his emails for work assignment was becoming her solace. She would read each email so many times and then diligently worked on it.  He had left for work next day itself.

Maan was returning from work break after a month. Geet learnt that.  He was not going to Kalsia but coming here. Her happiness has no bound. It was unexpected. She could not miss this chance. She will go any length but get her chance this time from him.

Maan reached Mansion, offloaded and directly went to Gym. He took shower in gym itself and went to his room, he had to. But as he entered, his eye stuck on figure behind the sear. After so many days!!

He could see her shadowy figure, more enhanced by the evening orange light, making it all so magical and she was struggling to get her saari perfect. She didn’t even know to wear sari, why was she even trying and at this hour.

“For you” his heart said. He closed his eyes, “No” he needed to be in control. But effect of his losing heart, his steps automatically moved and he removed the sear to intrude her privacy.

Geet was struggling with her pleats when she felt his hand on the pleats near her abdomen. His finger making contact with her belly button, killing her. Ohhh.. he was hear, so near.

“Fix it now” came his heavy yet low sound. She looked at him and their eyes met and passion just flowed. She kept looking at him, he kept looking at her. She was lost in her husband and her breath were heavy with his closeness. He didn’t realize when his hand left her pleats to fall them down and go on her waist. Geet closed her eyes to feel the heavenly touch of his magical fingers on her. He kept looking at her change in expressions as his fingers kept moving on her bare waist. His hand slowly moved up from her waist to her shoulder, giving ten thousand jitter to her and leaving her in half worn half fallen sari. None cared.h

She felt his fist tight on her shoulder, she did not disturb “Kyun… Kyun Kiya aisa tumne” he asked helpless. He was not being able to move forward till he get clarity. He placed his forehead on hers. Geet took her hand on his cheeks, only this much of his closeness and she was burning. He was breathing heavy

“Sirf or sirf aapse hee pyar kiya hai” his hand loosened from her shoulder and went to her bare waist and pulled her to him

“Kiss-se, Your Maan Sir not your husband right?” he was breathing heavy and his breath were fanning on her face. She wanted to drink it all

“My Husband Raja Sahib”

“Don’t lie, Jhooth se nafrat hai mujhe” Geet could hold no more and moved forward to hug him, tight. This broke his trance. He moved away

“I’ll send someone to help you” “Ji” barely came from her lips…. she was all red. He left out of room.

He was roaming in elegant garden of his Mansion. He had lead a life of saint till now. She has entered his life with all her faults and antics and shook the desire deep within him. It rose like phoenix with her presence. Why with her when she has hurt him.

“And now she claims she has fallen in love with her husband. Jhoot. She is in love with her husband because I happen to be her Maan Sir.”

“Or is it as she claims. But how? She clearly told me she was so fed up of her Dusta Danav.”

He later came to dinner table. Geet had decorated the dinner table with rose flowers, candles and other decorations. The foods were laid. He looked at her “These won’t change the facts” she did not say anything. She just wanted to be in the feel of his touch today. Talking would lessen the effect. On the top, all his complains were valid and she accepted them by heart.

After dinner Geet was walking side by side. What he observed, she was rubbing her hands together. At last he turned to her

“Now what?” he asked at last, she nodded for No

“No then fine.” And he started to move forward

“Nahi woo” He closed his eyes. This girl, who happens to be his wife is one confused soul and turning him into one

He turned to her again, she looked down seeing his angry look.

“I was thinking if we can have a long drive”

“Really?” he narrowed his eyebrows “No. its fine.” He kept looking at her and she was talking to herself

“Pucha he kyun phir?” but he heard “No need to curse me. Give me half an hour. Will meet you here”

And he went up the stairs. Geet’s happiness knew no bound and she started her small happy dance. Maan sensing something looked behind and their eyes met as she was dancing. He smiled to himself but shook his head to her. Shy Geet slowly straightened herself. He turned back and she hit her head.

“Bas ker Jhalli. What will he think.” She was red with shy as she waited for him.

Maan went to his study. What is he doing? he was thinking. She was sad and he came here and now he could not deny her request.

“Whatever” he jerked his thought and freshened bit and went downstairs. Geet looked at him and blushed. Her these surrender and blush were melting him within along with stirring his heart.

As they settled “Thank you” she said in low voice

“Hmm” is all he could utter. He kept driving quietly and all Geet could do was steal glances at her hubby. Her thoughts started getting bit naughty with him being around. Shapes of his lips, how perfectly M shaped they were. What will it feel when he will place them on hers. She shuddered with the thought

“What happened” he was so alert all the time

“Ji Nahi kuch nahi” Then after a long silence she gathered all courage. She had to

“can you not give our relation a chance?” she asked. She knew she was sounding desperate, but he was her husband, right?

“And what is this coming on drive with you?” She did not say anything, just smiled and looked down. Her heart was jumping in joy. She could not believe; he was giving their relation a chance. But that doesn’t mean she will not work on wining his trust.

“Kaddos.. will never answer straight” she thought and then scolded herself

“Stop over expecting” after some 45 minutes of peaceful drive he stopped the car in empty land.

Okay drive was peaceful from outside, within both their hearts had storms of things going on.

The bright moonlight was making the whole feel more sensitive. He started to move in the empty land, she simply followed. It was dream for her. They reached the bench in the mid of the land. He settled there. After a while he turned to her

“What do you want from this relation” he asked. Her heart was not in its place, he was actually talking about their relation

She looked into his deep eyes “In this relation, my journey and Goal is same. It goes thru you to you. Bas”

He looked down and smiled to himself, if she really understands what she is saying.

“Fine.”

“For you?” she asked. He smiled to himself, for long kept looking at the empty land. What he was going to answer was something he has never done. Never done anything for himself. But now he was going to do. He was hurt and he cannot proceed in giving from his side until his heart was fixed. First time in life he was going to say something to her that he had never ever said to anyone. But he could not lie to be shown good to her.

He got up and she along with him

“At present I am only moving forward in this relation for myself. I want to give myself a married life. Later things can change but for now, I am moving in this relation for me. I am not in state to” she placed her hand on his lips, shivering him with her soft touch.

“Bas. You are giving chance to this relation is enough for me to make it dreamy for both of us. Thank-You” and she moved forward and hugged him. He could not hug her back but did deny either.

After a while, she looked at him “Shuru se shuru karen” he narrowed his eyes.

She left him and ran in the empty land “Crazy” he shook his head and then after ten minutes she came with a wild plant having some wild flower on it. She sat on her knees and forwarded him the wild flower

“Will you marry me.. Phirse?” he looked at her in shock “What?”

17 thoughts on “Enchanted – One Chance

  1. Very very Beautiful update. Geet made mistake but she is trying hard to rectify and Maan is hurt but can’t hurt her. He gave chance to geet now it’s upto her how she will prove her love for him. This made coming track so interesting and wonderful. Thanks for the update

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  2. Amazing… Finally some gaps got filled.. I love maan Straightforwardness… He speaks to the point… Loved the way geet proposed him…

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  3. maan is confuse about choose way protect his hurt heart or move forwards with heart which melt in presence n for geet
    geet is trying her best to correct her mistake n move in their relation
    geet knows that maan reason being hard in their relation is true n justified

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  4. Surprising and Beautiful Chapter

    The fact that Maan checks on Geet’s daily work
    shows he cares
    while finding out that she is not well , he comes back
    to their mansion
    its difficult for Maan to trust Geet as she is the one that
    was chasing her Maan Sir but now she says she wants her marriage
    with Raja Saheb
    making Maan confuse yet he also understands that Geet is very young
    and she is family but she is only his
    I like that both are giving their relationship a chance
    hopefully Maan falls deeply in love with his wife
    oh wow Geet just propose marriage once again to Maan
    wonder what will he say now
    because I think this second marriage will cut out all mistakes
    and hurt and maybe both can together travel their marriage

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  5. Along with maan me too “what?!” Like seriously!! She is proposing Raja sahib?? She is total surprise package!!

    Raja sahib just amazed us by accepting that he is in for himself. Our nautanki rani will definitely make his world colorful.

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  6. Beautiful update maaneet are all set to give chance to their relationship but maan still cannot fix his heart with the fact she was drooling over her boss than her husband and feels he was cheated…still one side of his heart is melting seeing wife’s innocence waiting to read more ❤️

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  7. Hi Anu…
    thanks for updating…….

    Chapter 23
    Extraordinary update… impressively written
    Maan’s thoughts and dilemma are understandable
    at least he is not determined to punish her
    liked that he accepted her as family
    he indeed cannot see her in tears
    of cos he wants a life partner
    great that his heart wants to give the benefit of doubt
    alas its not easy considering her actions
    sad that he does not have the luxury to think about himself
    glad that Geet is working and studying sincerely
    wonderful that she wants to bridge the gap between them
    nice that he checks her work
    as expected she is happy that he is back from his work trip and is coming to Delhi
    so she is determined to get speak to him
    hmm Maan cannot help but admire his beautify wife
    ahh they both are affected by each other
    not surprised that Maan confronted Geet
    he needed clarity
    well she said that she loves him and only him
    his response was justified
    oh he finds it hard to believe her
    she has awakened his desires
    at least he agreed to take care for a drive
    adore this shy Geet
    yet again Maan analyses his actions
    Gosh Geet and her naughty thoughts
    finally she asked if he can their relationship a chance
    so he is giving them a chance
    his question was reasonable
    pleased with her reply
    admire that Maan was upfront with her
    he is doing this for himself
    good that she does understands him and is willing to do anything to make this relationship work
    agree with Maan that she is crazy
    loved that she proposed to him and wants to get married again
    hope he agrees as they need a fresh start ….
    Geet is perfect for him and fill his life with laughter and happiness

    update soon

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  8. this was really dreamy
    every scene of it
    maan couldnt deny the attraction n warmth that he has for her …but at the same tim he is unable to forgive her …saari part was so beautiful loved how both get affectdd by eachother….knew that he wont be able to hurt her in anyways..wow maan comes to his wify instead going to khalsia…geet determined toget one chance n now maan too wants himself to a married life for himself..i loved the part where geet purposed him to marry her again that was soo dreamy!!!!!!! i know now she wont leave a stone turned to get him….cant wait to read this enchanting journey more nore now

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  9. Maan was gym he was confused thinking Geet but he was hurt geet try to impress raja sahab maan was stunt Geet trying wear saree maaneet both attract each other their closeness he shocked geet said loves him Geet want go to long drive geet ask one chance for their life he too accept he enjoyed her cute little antics raja sahab was shocked geet proposed him

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  10. Amazing…

    Loved it…

    She is working hard for his forgiveness n winning his trust…

    He is noticing her efforts…

    Long drive not bad…

    They are now both ready to give it a chance for their own reasons but important ye hai ke, they are atleast trying…

    She is crazy… Seriously…

    Geet rocks.. Maan shocks…

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  11. Fantabulous update.every scene was so well narrated.Maan is giving a Chance to his relation. even though he is attracted to her he is not able to forget that she cheated him.she wants to win his heart.by marrying him again she want to live all the moments she missed with him.eager for next update.

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  12. Lovely update

    Love maaneet talk n closeness Scene … Beautifully written … Finally geet ask for one chance n maan decided the same as he can’t see sad geet n it effect him

    Geet so happy that maan giving chance n love her answer… “In this relation, my journey and Goal is same. It goes thru you to you. Bas” 🙌🙌🙌 amazing lines… Heart touchy❤️

    Geet proposed maan 😍

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