Enchanted – Inception

He supported her in front of all. Yes, he supported her as Rani Sahiba of Kalsia and not his wife but still her heart was beaming with joy. His last sentence went inside her heart. She will prove his words right. She has fallen in his eyes as his wife but she will rise up and walk straight to his heart as his wife.

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They sat in the car for his work in Kalsia.  Seated beside her husband and a person who she has bad crush on as her husband and as boss.

Geet was now and then looking at him but he was busy into his phone, looking into some calendar and schedules.

“Can we talk please” she said looking at him               

“Regarding?” he said still looking at his phone 

“Us”

“You are coming to Kalsia with me as Rani Sahiba. Take it as responsibility. I am not forcing it on you”

“I really want to be your partner in your work. I am coming with seriousness. I am not asking you to trust me. I know it’s not easy.” He did not say anything.

In Kalsia, as Raja Sahib, he had planned to meet few new members of Kalsia. If any bride is new to Kalsia or any child is born, Raja Sahib would once in 5-6 months keep plan to meet new member of city.  This only brought the loyalty towards Royals and Kalsia among people. He ardently believed in Leadership by example. It was not easy task for big entrepreneur like him but Kalsia was equally important to him.

As the royal vehicle entered one of the small alley, the kids came running. Car speeded very slow and kids kept clinging to the car. Raja Sahib had no annoyance, he smiled at all kids. Geet simply kept looking at her husband, he was so young dynamic. Can be heart beat raiser of so many girls but his gesture in kalsia was of what a mature man, who must have seen phases of life.

At one point the car stopped, security came forward and then moved back and Raja Sahib and Rani Sahiba walked side by side. Driver knocked the small door of Chaudhary Charanjeet Singh. Door opened and the lady in her 60’s was shocked to see the driver

“Raja Sahib is here with Rani Sahiba to bless the new born”

“Raja Sahib” the lady could not believe, came forward and joined her hands and sat down on her knees in respect

“Please don’t do this” Maan held her shoulder and raised her up “Wanted to see the little one. Can we come in?” Geet mutely looked at him, how humble he was.

“Just order Raja Sahib, don’t ask. Everything here is yours, we belong to you Raja Sahib. Come in please”

She ran and informed the family. Everyone in family gathered and welcomed them with whatever they had. Everyone got into hustle bustle to fix the area to make the king and queen seated.

“Stay calm everyone. We are fine to be seated the way you leave.”

“Raja Sahib you are here, it’s matter of pride for us. Let us do what all we can please” pleaded an old man.

“So am I not member of families of kalsia? If you do formality with me how will I know the real Kalsia.”

They made them settled. Whatever Raja Saheb said, but kids were made to run from backdoor for welcome arrangement. Geet was looking at Middle class house of Kalsia, yet very neatly done. Everyone here was so simple yet content.

Raja Sahib started talking to elders regarding their wellbeing and issues. While Geet looked at kids and waved at them. But Geet being her childish self, got involved with kids. Slowly more neighbors poured in and their kids came as well. Elders were focused on Raja Sahib whereas Geet made herself busy with kids. Slowly-slowly completely getting involved in them. She handed chocolates and stuff to them, teasing them. They became friendly with her and forgot she was Rani Sahiba. Maan while talking to elders, could not miss the childish wife of his, completely involved in kids. The way she was making faces and her acts, his eyes now and then went to her.

Once a kids tricked her and took stuff from her hand and she made baby face and Raja Sahib saw it. He turned other side as smiled form on his face with her acts. She looked spotless, filled with liveliness. Had he not seen her flirting with him, not as her husband, it would have been different.

He actually felt happy of the way she handled the visit, being herself.  

Later the lady brought the new born child for Raja Sahib’s blessings. As the baby came, Maan saw the excitement in Geet’s eye. She was so eager to hold the new born in her hand. The lady passed Geet and was handling baby to Raja Sahib

“Place the baby in Rani Sahiba’s hand” he signaled to Geet. Lady did as she was asked to. Geet’s face glowed as she held the baby. Maan for few moments forgot what blunder she has done and got lost in her happiness.

They later visited few more commoners, Maan discussed the issue and well-being while Geet gelled in with ladies and kids in her own way. But in all this liveliness and childishness, she never left the dignity of Rani Sahiba. He had observed her whole day; she may have her own way but she was doing good in her role as Rani Sahiba.

By the time they came, Geet was all tired while Maan, as Raja Sahib and as businessman, MSK, had more meetings to catch up in palace.

Next two days Maan was busy with his stuff and Geet busy in sharing her excitement of her visit to people as Rani Sahiba with Annie and Dadima.

Maan though being busy, would once in a while see her talking, making hand and face gesture. How can a bad person or a cheater by heart have such innocence in acts but his mind strongly objected his heart. She had cheated on her husband. Mind would shout on him and he would immediately leave.

Geet was not getting time with raja Sahib

“Geet it won’t work this way. Being Geetanjali won’t work. You have to be Geet. Abb bohut ho gaya, naraz hona hai hoyen, Baat toh kerni paregi.”

That night again Maan came late to his room thinking she must have gone to sleep but as he entered, she was awake. He tried to walk ahead, ignoring her but she ran and stood exactly in front of him, her hands wide spread

“Geet, what is this?” Geet made face, not having single idea of what her face making did to her serious-serious Raja Sahib husband

“This is me and my Hands, stopping you.”

He dropped her hand, shook his head and moved forward but she ran and again stopped his way. Maan placed his hands on his waist and looked at her keenly, uff her heartbeat changed frequency with that look

Losing her sense with his look, she blurted “You are breaking your promise” and she hit her head mentally for senseless blurt

“Really?” and he took his step forward towards her, confused with his forward move, Geet stepped back. Also it was taking tons of courage for her to speak like this to him, but she had to continue talk.

“Yes. You said we will talk. You have no time for your wife” she said

He again moved forward, making her step back and hitting the cupboard. Now she has triggered him, even unknown to him, Geet’s husband Maan came out. He bordered her both side with his hands on cabinet wall and looked intently at her

“My wife? Whose wife Geet, Maan Sir or Raja Sahib” With his closeness, him bordering her like that and this new unexpected avatar, Geet’s throat went dry. She gulped her saliva but today she had to talk to him, get his anger out.

“What’s the difference?” she tried to argue

“Difference? The difference is Geet” he paused and looked deep into her eyes. Geet blinked as he had his angry handsome face so close in front of her eyes

“You were never interested in your husband when he was boring Raja Sahib for you but very interested when your crush Maan Sir turned out to be your husband”

“No. That’s not true” she said in low voice “Really?” he challenged

“Really” she said in low voice. His closeness anyways takes her senses away and when he is in his aggressive mode, all her boldness disperses in thin air.

“Prove it.” He moved out to take his night clothes out and before entering the washroom

“And don’t forget to check your office email Geet” he said, naughtiness sparkling in his eyes. He definitely had trapped her in something. Geet made baby face, he again got her stuck in his words.

This was not at all him with anyone. Not Raja Sahib at all. He was simply hidden Maan, deep inside who was surfacing very slowly with Geet, for Geet.

As he went to washroom, Geet went to study to check her emails. BINGO!! There was email from Maan Sir. Meeting invite 9 am for project discussion. Another email on her plan for week and couple more emails. And one email expecting her to be in office

Geet made angry frustrated face “Itne bhi koi sedhe nahi hain jitney duniya ko dihkte hain. How will I win my husband if I am stuck in work with him?” She knew he will not give her single chance to talk personal as intern and that exactly was his plan.

All frustrated Geet went to bedroom only to find him peacefully lying in bed with his eyes closed. But as she saw her husband sleeping peacefully, she stopped to see his handsome face which was at peace. Unlike other days, when she had seen stress on his face even during sleep, today she felt there was smile.

She quietly moved near his face and sat on ground on her knees. She wanted to take satisfying look at her husband. She took her hand closer to feel his face but then folded her fingers and took back her hand.

The little small argument and him pouring little complain to her also brought little naughtiness in him, she realized, no one would have ever seen that glimpse of him. He was mature man loaded with responsibility for everyone. They treated him that way and thus he bearing the burden of that image and he has molded himself for that. But doing so much, he deserves a young man’s life. The life that normal 31-32-year young man would have. In personal space, no one was his partner, Dadima was two generations up, siblings were like his kids, he was guardian to them and others in family were his enemies. But she was his wife, she will be his partner. Someone to whom he can fight and complain to, get angry to. She will get his hidden nature of him, which he has buried deep within.

She knew it will not be easy to deal with him that way, he is not used to that part. But she will not add herself as his responsibility, she will share it with him, off course in her own way.

She felt angry on herself for her acts. But she was happy in one way, had she been a good wife, he would have taken her as other member of family and took responsibility of her. Now that he is angry with she will have more ways to trouble him. She chuckled in naughtiness. In their personal space, he will just be her husband, no Raja Sahib and no Rani Sahiba. They will be “Geet and” she took a deep breath gathered courage before speaking out his name “Maan”. She felt shy, closed her face with her palms.

Maan moved a little, maybe his name went in his ears. But then he turned and slept back.

Geet went on her side to sleep with a smile.

19 thoughts on “Enchanted – Inception

  1. Hello Anu…. thanks so much for the update

    Chapter 21
    Impressive update…. fabulously written
    Geet’s efforts to speak to Maan about them is commendable
    Maan’s response was predictable
    at least Geet realises after what she did its not easy for Maan to trust her
    Geet will have to win Maan’s heart and trust
    Admire that Raja Sahib believes in leadership by example
    great that he makes a point to visit the new people of Kalsia
    so Geet is lost in her dynamic husband
    as expected Raja Sahib is humble and simple person
    he treats his people with respect
    no wonder the people of Kalsia revere him
    of cos he enquires about their well being
    not surprised seeing Rani Sahiba interact with the kids
    Wow Raja Sahib smiled seeing her antics
    Raja Sahib cannot help but appreciate how she handled the visit
    liked he said that Rani Sahiba should hold the baby first as he saw her excitement
    at least for those moments he forget what she did to him
    glad that Geet impressed Maan in her role as Rani Sahiba
    seeing Geet and her acts, Maan is confused
    Maan’s dilemma is well portrayed …. heart and the mind….
    alas the mind won
    sadly Geet is not getting time with Raja Sahib
    good that she resolved that she needs to be Geet and not Geetanjali to get him to talk to her
    hmm he though to avoid her but she was waiting for him
    nice that she took the initiative and confronted him
    his question was justified
    while her response was reasonable
    Maan assuming that reason she is now interested in him is understandable
    she does deny…..
    will she be able to prove this to him as he wants?
    Gosh he reminds her to check her work email
    oh Maan sir wants her to be at the office
    he has cleverly ensured that as they will be at the office there will be no personal talks between them
    adore her cribbing….
    how long will this carry on? will she manofy him?
    Loved Geet admiring her hubby
    she has correctly analysed him and now understands him
    only she gets to see the naughtiness in him
    pleased that she wants to be his partner in every way and share his responsibility
    wonderful that she wants to be bring out the hidden Maan in him
    Geet is indeed mature yet naughty….
    looking forward to seeing how she will trouble him
    this is what Maan needs….
    can understand why dadima chose Geet for him
    well she wants them in their personal space to be just Maan and Geet

    update soon……

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  2. Great part
    Wow first trip as raja sahib and rani went well
    Geet trying to make her own space
    Loved maaneet’s part at the end
    Hope Geet manages to bring maan out
    Cont soon

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  3. Wow beautiful update. First outing in kalasia as couple went well. Geet trying to manofiy raja sahib that part was so cute and with her raja sahib in his real nature. Geet now understand what she have to do to win her husband and to give happiness to maan. Waiting for next

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  4. Fascinating and Admiral Chapter

    Once again I just loved the chapter
    Geet going out with Raja Saheb to see the people in Kalsia
    I truly admired Geet , as she gets lost in the kids playing
    while even Raja Saheb was happy that Rani Saheba did so well
    but back at the palace Maan just avoids Geet
    until she approaches him and again he wants to know
    when she felt her husband is Raja Saheb , she felt he is old and boring
    but now that her husband turned out to be her crush ,she wants
    to be interested in the marriage
    I actually feel bad for both of them , they cannot continue
    their married life all because of hurt caused by Geet
    hopefully soon she gets her husband without any anger

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  5. loved it loved it loved it totally
    i really like how royal family is so concerned about people of kalsia esp raja saheb…he is justt too good to be true
    geet accompaining him was one of the best decison i feel …i liked how she was being herself with the kids even maan couldnt stop admiring her…. but him thinking her as cheater pains me…. ofcourse things would have been diff if they didnt start like this but im liking geets spirits now…yeah geet is surfacing …she is taking everything positively makes me happy…loved how she blocked maan this time…haha maan is no less got her tons of work so that they wont have face off lets see how geets gonna counterback this time…really excited to read more and more now

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  6. Loved the update..so Raja Sahib and Rani sahiba visited the kalsia people everyone where happy with the royal presence meanwhile maan observed his childish wife who gelled well with everyone and loved the way geet pulled out a complete new maan who only she knows… happy that maan did complain out his heart little..and his mischievousness of loading geet with work waiting to read more ❤️

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  7. Nice update..
    Raja Sahib and Rani sahiba visited the kalsia people ..
    maan observed his childish wife who gelled well with everyone..
    geet shared news with daadi and annie..
    He loading geet with work ..
    waiting for next update..

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  8. Wonderful update.Geet now understanding her husband and trying to make Maan forget his anger on her.Maan is mesmerized by her acts but his mind is dominating his heart.hope Geet win her husband and his love.

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  9. Beautiful ritual of kalsia. Raja sahib visiting household would definitely make a positive picture of the royals. And rani sahiba mingling with them without any hesitation will just boost their love.

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  10. Geet saw rajasahab was busy with phone calls she ask him want talk to him he said he don’t want force go to kalisa with him Geet admired raja sahab how treat with people old lady was happy maaneet came here maan silently wstching his wife cute antics with kids he was happy geet pended come to kalisa with him after return maan was busy with his office work geet shared her visit to Annie and dadi Geet want talk to him stopping him she reminded him try to spend time with her maan teased her and give heavy work she didn’t leave spend time with him Geet admired maan sleeping interesting update

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  11. Awesome update

    Maaneet meet with comman people n raja saheb involved in elders still noticing and admiring his chaildish wife with children… Geet’s charm always work on maan 😉😄

    Maaneet again talk n maan poured little bit of his heart n happy with it … Geet realize in maans life no body there as companian n she will be there with him as his partner which he missed in life 💓

    Amazingly written 👏

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