Enchanted – Marriage Proposal

Raja Saheb is gone for some critical meeting for couple of days. He comes back pretty late on third day

He gets call from Savitri Devi “Ji Dadima”

“Can you come to meet your Dadima or I need to get your appointment as well” she sounded really irritated and he knew the reason; His disappearance and his phone completely switched off.

“Dadima, will be in your room soon”

In Dadima’s room “What was this all. Do you think it’s my age to take such pressure”?

“I am sorry Dadima for my lack. I work day and night, so as to remove all stress from your forehead. But I am sorry to be the reason”

She came and lovingly caressed his cheeks “Bete, that is my problem. In taking everyone’s problem on your head, you have forgot your life exist; that you should live even for yourself”

“Dadima – I am fine, main khush hoon. I don’t have time to think about myself, my life is surrounded by so many things I feel more than contended”

“My heart gets scared. Beta, can you accept my one request” “Dadima, your wish is my command. Just place it” “Promise aap manenge” she looked at him with expectations. He nodded for agreement.

“I want you to marry” she said straight without stories around it.  He laughed; she loved when her grandson, who had innumerable things going on in his brain and who would be hell serious planning so many things and who have forgot to live his life, sometimes laughed.

“Aap haste hue bahut achche lagte hain”

“Dadima, I don’t have time to fall in love. And when there will be no love, life of that girl will be punishment with me”

“Who aap humpe chor dijiye. I have found a girl for you, who will make you fall in love with her”

“Ok Dadima!!. He shied. She has been trying this for long and he had been denying. But she was getting old and pleading him, he felt like he was troubling her with his no every time and he had no specific reason other than he had no time for love and such things.

“As you wish. Anyways, people of Kalsia are waiting for their Rani Sahiba. Enemies have started spreading rumors now. So this marriage will be good to shut them as well” he added his point on that.

“Bete sometimes think about yourself too. But ok, who sikha degi. When I went as chief guest in Delhi College last year I saw thig girl. Mujhe ek hee nazar me laga aapke liye banee hai. Then I kept track of her. Her father and brother has well descent business. She is commoner, not from any princely state but I think she is perfect for you. Sabke ladli aur apne duniya me mast”

“Ok Dadima. Just make sure girl agree to marry, you think she is made for me, but I doubt if I am made for her or not. I don’t want anyone to marry me under pressure of this name and power” “Ok beta”

Ten Days Later: Handa Haveli

“Geet tomorrow you are not going out. All your exams are finished and you don’t have reason to roam around in city “announced Rano

“Yes, the royal family is coming for your alliance. It’s the best proposal that I could find for this nomad girl. So I want you to be good and behave Geet” ordered Mohinder

“Veerji.. Mumma and Papaji are behaving as if I am worst. But who is the boy”

“I had told you Geet, I will find a best one for you but they found you. I am just wondering how did he approve for this alliance.” Papaji was overwhelmed with the proposal

“Dad, you are talking as if he is approving any fund for your business”

“You will be surprised Geet. Do you want to know who the proposal is from?” Said Brij

“Why is there such big suspense of this? Please let me know who this great person is, who is doing mercy on me”

“Arre Nahi… My Geet is a diamond. My Geet is diamond and that is why we have such an alliance for her.” Said Ranoo caressing her head

Geet Hugged her Mom “Thanks Mom. But will anyone break this suspense of this great alliance.”

Rajji came in “I will tell Di” “Di… The alliance is for Raja Saheb”

“Raha Saheb? Which Raja Saheb?” Geet obviously did forgot about her chit chat that day and forgot about mention of Raja Saheb

“Raja Saheb of Kalsia Empire.”

“What?” Geet’s eye popped out

“Yes. He is the whole sole of the Empire of kalsia and Khurana Enterprise. Do you know he has so many secret govt. projects that he handles and he has say in important decision on national level as well? In Short one of most powerful and richest person of our country.” Said Brij

“You mean a real wale Raja Saheb want to marry me. But why? I don’t want to marry any Raja Saheb. There definitely is some trap”

“Geet again you have started reading the detective novels. Maharani Ji herself came with the alliance”

“What? You mean real Maharani came for my alliance”

“Abb real wale Raja Saheb ke liye real wali Maharani hee aayege”

“No No…. then there is real catch. Now, if he is so powerful, then he must be very old. Raj gharane ke chakkar me you are wedding me to old man”

“Geet he is Youth icon, most eligible bachelor and all princess and girls from biggest business family are in line waiting for alliance with him. He is not old, he is dynamic principled man of 31 years old. Extremely responsible for his age. And we have heard he is very handsome”

“10 yrs. difference in age, no way. I want to marry boy of my age and from my age group. And definitely not the prince type…. and this one is one step ahead – Raja Saheb”

Papaji sat down in front of Geet and joined his hand “Geet it’s a very nice alliance beta. Raja Saheb, we have all heard, takes care of his family and people above him. You will be his wife, what he will do for you. Just think. Aur aisa ghar hum kabhi nahi dhoondh payenge”

“Ghar nahi Raj Gharane me jayegi humari Geet” said Brij. His happiness could be felt. They were all so overwhelmed.

“Papaji, please don’t sit on your knees like that. If you so much want me to marry him, I will but on my terms.”

Brij became angry “They are Royal family, one of the highest and you will keep terms on them”

“Yes, why not. They came with alliance, not us. And I will be his wife and not his employee or anything. I need to know my position after marriage. I am risking my life. I am really not interested in this Raja Saheb. His younger brother would have been better but this Raja Saheb and his authority is just irking me. I am ready just because of you all”

Ranoo came forward and placed her hand on Geet’s head “You will be very happy”

“I don’t know Mumma. I want to send one message to Raja Saheb directly. I want to see if he agrees on it”

“Aur Na ker di toh?” all asked together; they were scared of her NO.

“Mumma, Papaji, Veerji – I said YES already but I need to know where I stand. Aaplog toh Shadi kerwa doge, aage toh mujhe dekhna hoga.”

Geet got up in slight irritation hitting on of the glass of water on dining Table and the hit her leg on the table and was about to tumble when Brij held up “Disaster like you definitely need a responsible like him”

“I can handle myself very well. My friends can handle my mess, I don’t need that high profile Raja Saheb to handle me. Chaddo, I can walk” and she walked to her room limping slightly

Geet wrote her note, glued it and handed it to Papaji.

Savitri Devi called Raja Saheb to her room “Yes Dadima”

“I have message from someone special for you” “Who? Maybe some fake terror letter”

“Terror or love letter, that you can decide after you read. Letter from your would-be wife Geetanjali”

He knotted his brows and took the letter and left for his room

Precap: Conditional Marriage

30 thoughts on “Enchanted – Marriage Proposal

  1. amazing
    maan agrees to marry
    here im loving geet already
    she is just soo cool
    i think this one gonna rock maans world…
    now cant wait to read what she wrote in the letter

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  2. Awesome update
    Maan don’t want to marry but he is agree for his Daadi ma
    Because he doesn’t want to stress her
    Geet is also don’t want to marry but she is agree for her family but with her conditions
    Beautifully written
    Loved it

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  3. Hey readers.. Thanks to all who places the comment and like the post. But to silent readers, it a request that you place some view on chapter.. It encourages and help the writers. As a writer, I try hard to bring story in a entertaining way to you. So even couple of words from you will be treasure for me. 🙂

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  4. Dadima called raja sahab want his marriage finally he accepted her wish she already choose girl Geet family told her for alliance but she don’t want thinking age difference and royal family finally she too accept for her family but she conditions to raja sahab nice update

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  5. Thanks for updating

    Chapter 2
    Fabulous update…. Superbly written
    Dadima’s annoyance with Maan is reasonable
    good that she shouts at him when she sees him
    of cos Maan apologises…
    he loves his dadima so much
    she has a point that in managing everything he has forgot to live for himself
    as expected he assures her
    sad that he has no time to think about himself
    her concern for Maan is justified
    well she makes him promise that he will do want she wants
    not surprised that she wants Maan to get married
    and he just laughs
    agree with her that he looks nice while laughing
    Maan’s response was understandable
    hmm he wants a love marriage………
    great that dadima already found a girl for Maan
    glad Maan agreed to get married
    she was correct that he should think about himself
    at least she told Maan about the girl she saw and reveals what she knows…..
    loved that Maan wants the girl to say yes and not marry him for his name and power
    so the girl that dadima saw was Geet
    her family reveals about her alliance with a royal family
    her dad is overwhelmed with the proposal
    Geet and her taunts lol
    Geet is shocked hearing who the potential groom is
    her reaction was anticipated
    she does find this unbelievable
    nice that they reveal more about Raja Saheb
    but Geet is perturbed with the age difference
    pleased that he dad tries to allay her fears
    she is judging Maan without knowing him
    finally she agrees but on her terms and wants to send a message to Raja Saheb
    oh so she thinks his younger bro would have been better
    eager to see her reaction when she meets Raja Saheb
    its natural for Geet to what to know where she stands
    Geet is indeed a disaster queen
    now Maan gets a note from his would be wife
    wonder what she wrote?

    Intriguing precap
    already waiting for Chap 3~!

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  6. Lovely update, liked geets attitude and thinking. The way she thought about the whole marriage with a king and her role in the life of the person whom she is going to marry is wonderful.

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  7. Sorry for late comment

    Fabulous Chapter

    I enjoyed Geet and her family
    well she wants someone at least of her age
    while Raja Saheb is 10 years elder than her
    she is rather feisty sending him her conditions
    now I’m eager to know about his actions and emotions
    on her demands

    Precap sounds Fascinating and Interesting

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  8. wonderful update
    maan agree to marry for dadi’s happiness .
    geet’s family very happy receiving marriage proposal for geet from raja sab/maan
    geet first refuses but then agree for her family

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  9. Wow!!! Geet is placing condition before Raja saheb. She has guts. And truly speaking she is right, she has to live the life. And handling royal etiquette is not easy for bindass commoners.

    Lets see what is her condition is.

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  10. Superb so maan agreed to Alliance and geet was irritated with her alliance that to with a. Tag RAJA SAHEB so geet is all set to put condition forward on agreeing this alliance for only her family… waiting to know what is in Letter..❤️

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  11. Hi dear, just started reading Enchanted… start is really interesting…. geet is really chul buli wonder how she will enact as a princess… and Maan is very strict…would love to see the story unfolding

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  12. this is maan’s geet, or we can tell raja saheb ki rani saheba………..get going geet……..magar maan kaise lega pata nehi…………

    loved it…………….

    awesome…………..

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  13. Awesome update

    Maan n dadi talk was lovely… Maan 31 n dadi wants him to settle down n live his life for himself too… so she finds geet for him… Dadi is great 😄
    Maan agreed as dadi want this for long n he hv no such reason to denie

    Other side geet talk with family.. lovely… Awesomely written
    Geet’s family was so happy with raja saheb alliance n want geet to agree to it

    Geet irritated with all build up and ask about a guy who is doing mercy to marry her… 😂😂😂 Great line

    Geet shocked to know The Raja Saheb Rishta for her n he is 10 years elder than her…. she was ok with vicky but not with MSK 🤣

    Well for family she agreed n says yes like maan but geet sent letter for maan … Conditions … Interesting 😄

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  14. Geet s family is nice. Savitri devi got her in college and liked her for maan. Great Choice. Hope, maan will set everything perfect because geet doesn’t wan marry to any raja shaheb.

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