The Burnt – Chapter 25

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  1. Hi Anu

    how are you?

    thanks for updating

    Congrats on 25 updates smiley40

    Chapter 25

    Brilliant update…. impressively written

    well the dynamics between Maan and Geet have changed significantly

    sad that Geet is not talking to Maan

    glad that Maan realised that pushing Geet away was a mistake

    pleased he knows that to move forward he needs to let go of his guilt

    whilst its not easy 

    but he is determined to focus on Geet’s happiness

    Geet’s anger with Maan’s suggestion was justified

    at least that she understood why Maan suggested that

    liked that Geet will not give in easily

    of cos she wants Maan to confront his feelings and win her back

    great that she wants to make effort for his feelings as well

    wonderful that Maan and Advay spend more time together 

    adore Maan and Advay’s bond

    so Maan gets grumpy when he does not spend time with Advay

    finally he acknowledged that it was a blunder for him to send Advay away

    loved that Maan and Geet have coffee and watch the sunrays

    however this was done in silence

    as expected Maan is lost in admiring Geet

    Geet was indeed aware that Maan was checking her out

    Geet’s thoughts were reasonable

    she clearly knows Maan so well

    ahh she reflects on the past

    not surprised that she knows she means far more to him

    his actions reflected that

    wonderful that she knows Maan loves and cares for her so much

    despite everything she does things for Maan

    now a month has passed

    finally Maan knows that he they need to move beyond the silence

    aww he wants to make her feel special

    and for that he has bring romance

    Maan’s thoughts were understandable

    Pari was really confused regarding Maan’s new project – dating app and the polls

    ahh Maan is trying to get ideas to impress Geet

    he does not need to that

    he has to do everything from his heart

    Maan was naturally thinking about Geet

    update soon

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  2. Captivating Chapter

    Geet is waiting for Maan to make his first move

    while at the same time she is also hurt that Maan suggested Chetan

    as someone Geet can love

    but thankfully Maan realizes he can than lose both Geet and his son.

    Maan wanting ideas from the dating sites while Pari thinks he is about

    to commit some sin

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  3. Hi, nice chapter dear, Gradually Maan can understand that he can’t stay away from his son and wife, geet’s happiness lies on him and adyev can’t stay away from him, Maan wanted to talk with geet to keep her happy but geet doesn’t want to talk with Maan.

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  4. Lovely….

    Story is progressing very well…

    I LOVE READING YOUR ALL STORIES….

    Coming to the story, Finally Maan is trying to come out of his guilt…

    PLANNING TO IMPRESS GEET…

    Wanted to see how he impress his wife back…

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  5. great update

    geet understand why maan ask her move on in her life

    maan’s guilt is weighing him for geet’s happy life thinking his presence will hurt geet again

    geet giving maan silent treatment to push back his guilt for their happy life

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  6. Thanks for the update so glad to see maan being part of getting back his wife though she is upset and waiting for his own way of showering his love towards her…for giving confidence in their relationship…she is equally giving his time to see how much extent he goes for winning his love…now it’s time for receiving love for geet… Waiting to read more thanks for the update…and wishing you a happy new year

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  7. Awesome update . geet’s silent treatment worked and finally Maan realized he can’t live without geet and advay . he is planning to win geet back cos he knew her happiness lies with him and she loves him so much . his guilt is not so important than her . other side geet is doing everything for him , she stopped talking to him but she can see maan’s restlessness, she knew he is trying to talk to her but something stopped him . so maan is taking help from dating apps to impress geet 😉 and Pari thought he is doing some unethical work so she tried to give him gyan 🤣

    Waiting for next part .

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